Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Hand In Hand"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from luisestable
It is hard to be more poetic in such a short poem, only two line in length.
You have done good work here. You have shown mastery of the short form with this piece,
I like and I admire your diction in this.
Luis
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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It is hard to be more poetic in such a short poem, only two line in length.
You have done good work here. You have shown mastery of the short form with this piece,
I like and I admire your diction in this.
Luis
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you Luis
Comment from bowls
What a great picture! I love your expression BLOOMS HIGH. It takes the emotion to an extreme. I imagine feelings of love were very strong in those days of reunion after so much separation.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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What a great picture! I love your expression BLOOMS HIGH. It takes the emotion to an extreme. I imagine feelings of love were very strong in those days of reunion after so much separation.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you bowls
Comment from ScarletAffliction
the effect of this one is subtle. You'd miss it if you didn't take a few moments to consider it all with the picture in addition. Simply put, I thought it was well done, though I'm not fully decided if this feeling of....waiting for the poem to end...is good or not. lol. its thought provoking at least. Thanks for the interesting read.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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the effect of this one is subtle. You'd miss it if you didn't take a few moments to consider it all with the picture in addition. Simply put, I thought it was well done, though I'm not fully decided if this feeling of....waiting for the poem to end...is good or not. lol. its thought provoking at least. Thanks for the interesting read.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you scarlet
Comment from Katiesherrill
So much emotion and love are in these words. I love the picture. I can see a story in that. I have one of my Grandma and Grandpa when he is dressed in his Navy uniform. Such proud memories. Thanks for the romance and nostalgia.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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So much emotion and love are in these words. I love the picture. I can see a story in that. I have one of my Grandma and Grandpa when he is dressed in his Navy uniform. Such proud memories. Thanks for the romance and nostalgia.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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welcome Katie
Comment from Thilophian
dear deepwater,
the faith of love is a good use indeed. love is the only thing(it is not a thing) that can be believed and have faith on. It endures everything. It is the solution for all.
YOurs,
thilophian
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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dear deepwater,
the faith of love is a good use indeed. love is the only thing(it is not a thing) that can be believed and have faith on. It endures everything. It is the solution for all.
YOurs,
thilophian
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you for reading
Comment from Bellringer
Great little poem. The flight of the birds is symbolic of the lofty status of "The faith of Love." In First Corinthians 13, verse 7, it is written, " [Charity or love] bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things." Yes indeed "high" is this kind of love. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Great little poem. The flight of the birds is symbolic of the lofty status of "The faith of Love." In First Corinthians 13, verse 7, it is written, " [Charity or love] bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things." Yes indeed "high" is this kind of love. Well done.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you Bell
Comment from Halfree
Just a few words..well chose words opened a door to my mind and ideas flowed out. That's what happened when I read this two line masterpiece. Awfully good work.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Just a few words..well chose words opened a door to my mind and ideas flowed out. That's what happened when I read this two line masterpiece. Awfully good work.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you Halfree for reading
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Thanks for writing it
Comment from Awatef
This is a very cute poem I loved the accompanying photo. Anything about love has got to be good. Your poem was simply great.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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This is a very cute poem I loved the accompanying photo. Anything about love has got to be good. Your poem was simply great.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you Awatef
Comment from geoniasha
deepwater -- Based on your Author Notes, I detect the look of love born of a happy heart. Very nicely done. Thank you so much for sharing...a great entry. geo
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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deepwater -- Based on your Author Notes, I detect the look of love born of a happy heart. Very nicely done. Thank you so much for sharing...a great entry. geo
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you geo
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You're welcome. geo
Comment from patmedium
THis is yet another stunner! Congratulations, Gary.
I read this with admiration at you ability to handle minimal speech. Pat.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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THis is yet another stunner! Congratulations, Gary.
I read this with admiration at you ability to handle minimal speech. Pat.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you pat for this comment
