Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Hand In Hand"A book of Poetry & Writing
103 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I wish I could write a poem like this about my parents but I can't. I loved it. It was short yet sweet. You said enough without saying too much. Great job
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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I wish I could write a poem like this about my parents but I can't. I loved it. It was short yet sweet. You said enough without saying too much. Great job
Comment Written 25-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you red bird
Comment from l.conley
Okay this is a book not just random poems it's the your moms and dads story pictures are yours and real. I would love to read the whole book. You have got me interested. Beautiful mother!!
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Okay this is a book not just random poems it's the your moms and dads story pictures are yours and real. I would love to read the whole book. You have got me interested. Beautiful mother!!
Comment Written 30-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you I conley will be completed this year ( I hope )
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Deepwater ...
I specially like the photograph which you have at top, taken at a time when young women looked graceful and feminine in the clothing they wore.
There is nothing to suggest changing in this short work and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
Thank you for sharing your memories with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Hullo Deepwater ...
I specially like the photograph which you have at top, taken at a time when young women looked graceful and feminine in the clothing they wore.
There is nothing to suggest changing in this short work and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
Thank you for sharing your memories with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thanks again Nanette Gary
Comment from cupa tea
Nice little poem. I love old pictures and I've always felt each one has a story to tell. If only we knew what it was in some cases....
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Nice little poem. I love old pictures and I've always felt each one has a story to tell. If only we knew what it was in some cases....
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you cupa
Comment from RADIO
Wonderful picture and this time period
sure takes me back. I remember as a kid
marching alond the boulevard with an
American flag at war's end. I remember my
Uncle in his Marine uniform that so impressed
me that I later became a Marine. Quite a time
to grow up in and all those that served it is
always all in the time we're born.
Radio
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Wonderful picture and this time period
sure takes me back. I remember as a kid
marching alond the boulevard with an
American flag at war's end. I remember my
Uncle in his Marine uniform that so impressed
me that I later became a Marine. Quite a time
to grow up in and all those that served it is
always all in the time we're born.
Radio
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thanks again Radio for reading
Comment from ryanlion
this must have been a very happy poem for you, i'm sure, knowing how you're parents met, you have chosen your words very carefully and they are hte right ones
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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this must have been a very happy poem for you, i'm sure, knowing how you're parents met, you have chosen your words very carefully and they are hte right ones
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thanks ryan
Comment from hotstuff
Your short poem is lovely. Reading the contest rules I see that the poem has to be no longer than fifteen words and you used fourteen, well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Your short poem is lovely. Reading the contest rules I see that the poem has to be no longer than fifteen words and you used fourteen, well done and good luck.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thaank you
Comment from Peter Burger
With the picture, it kind of makes me imagine a woman in the 50's walking along the ocean. I somehow get that salty gust in the air as view the piece as a whole, picture included. The birds are seagulls overhead, gliding the tides, swimming in the wind. Fits the criteria, faith/love - emotive, philosophy, good word selection, you don't get much with this contest
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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With the picture, it kind of makes me imagine a woman in the 50's walking along the ocean. I somehow get that salty gust in the air as view the piece as a whole, picture included. The birds are seagulls overhead, gliding the tides, swimming in the wind. Fits the criteria, faith/love - emotive, philosophy, good word selection, you don't get much with this contest
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from Poetic Friend
Good usage of word economny. You can further reduce one word by deleting "do" in the second line without taking away from the meaning.
In its brevity, you offer awesome imagery and speak volumes. It was my pleassure to read this short love poem.
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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Good usage of word economny. You can further reduce one word by deleting "do" in the second line without taking away from the meaning.
In its brevity, you offer awesome imagery and speak volumes. It was my pleassure to read this short love poem.
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thank you Poetic
Comment from Hitcher
A moment captured and immortalized in the mind of the love stricken soul, very cool! Impressive use of so few words deepwater, I remember my first meeting with my forever friend;Like it was yesterday!Eighteen years ago now...
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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A moment captured and immortalized in the mind of the love stricken soul, very cool! Impressive use of so few words deepwater, I remember my first meeting with my forever friend;Like it was yesterday!Eighteen years ago now...
Comment Written 23-May-2010
reply by the author on 23-May-2010
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thanks again Hitcher for reading
