Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Dear old Gram,"A book of Poetry & Writing
124 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
Another nice read deepwater but I feel it didn't flow as good as the last one. I think that is only because I tried to read it with a structured rhyme scheme which was wrong to do so.
Without reading it with a set rhythm I found I was reading it better the second time
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Another nice read deepwater but I feel it didn't flow as good as the last one. I think that is only because I tried to read it with a structured rhyme scheme which was wrong to do so.
Without reading it with a set rhythm I found I was reading it better the second time
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from findingmyroom
I like to read about the courage and integrity of real, regular people in times of conflict. Your piece is a succinct tribute to one of those unsung folks. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2010
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I like to read about the courage and integrity of real, regular people in times of conflict. Your piece is a succinct tribute to one of those unsung folks. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2010
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thank you for reading finding
Comment from laren
This is a great and tender poem honoring the author's grandma and which tell us about other times, when things were't easy! It's also very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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This is a great and tender poem honoring the author's grandma and which tell us about other times, when things were't easy! It's also very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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thank you Laren for the review
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from Trybuck
A great poem celebrating your grandmother's life. It sounds like she endured and overcame many obstacles in her life. Very well done, Buck
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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A great poem celebrating your grandmother's life. It sounds like she endured and overcame many obstacles in her life. Very well done, Buck
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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thank you Buck for the review
Comment from E.P. Thomas
Gary,
This is a nicely written tribute to your grandmother. You've used some nice internal rhymes. Somber tone, but it seems to fit the message you are conveying. Great work.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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Gary,
This is a nicely written tribute to your grandmother. You've used some nice internal rhymes. Somber tone, but it seems to fit the message you are conveying. Great work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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thank you E P for this review
Comment from Raul GF
Oh the prisoners of war are sometimes the victims of all an enduring tragedy spreading too long through time, but as you point out the show us their bravery and that is a lesson we will never forget nor about their sacrifice.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Oh the prisoners of war are sometimes the victims of all an enduring tragedy spreading too long through time, but as you point out the show us their bravery and that is a lesson we will never forget nor about their sacrifice.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you for your review charlatan
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Nice addition to your book, Gary. I enjoy family motivated pieces. Your words brought feeling to the photo.
From the darkest of internment and toil
The morning did come with a risen sun>>great lines here.
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Nice addition to your book, Gary. I enjoy family motivated pieces. Your words brought feeling to the photo.
From the darkest of internment and toil
The morning did come with a risen sun>>great lines here.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you Isaiah for the review
Comment from kylielynn
Very nice. A wonderful tribute to a marvelous woman, I presume. Nice flow and a fitting rhyme scheme. You portrayed her very well. Best of luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Very nice. A wonderful tribute to a marvelous woman, I presume. Nice flow and a fitting rhyme scheme. You portrayed her very well. Best of luck with your writings.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you kylielynn for your welcome review and comments
Comment from P1
only thing i can say about this
piece is awwwwwwwww. how wonderful
you gave your nan a wonderul tribute
made her sound like the amazing woman
i'm sure she was and handled the
piece with total respect. loved it
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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only thing i can say about this
piece is awwwwwwwww. how wonderful
you gave your nan a wonderul tribute
made her sound like the amazing woman
i'm sure she was and handled the
piece with total respect. loved it
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you Paige for the veview and comments Gary
Comment from Peter Burger
Tough grandma. "She lived through this time for all of us." I like this line because it implies that everyone and everything is significant. If she was not such a strong person, I may not be reading your poem today. Powerful stuff. I like the internal rhymes, kind of adds more poetic technique while still maintaining the serious mood of the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Tough grandma. "She lived through this time for all of us." I like this line because it implies that everyone and everything is significant. If she was not such a strong person, I may not be reading your poem today. Powerful stuff. I like the internal rhymes, kind of adds more poetic technique while still maintaining the serious mood of the poem.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thanks peter for the review
