Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "old cowboys"A book of Poetry & Writing
65 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm dating someone right now and if something were to happened to either or us or if we were to break up, I don't know what would happen. I guess I would somehow manage to get through it but it would be hard. Great job with this piece
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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I'm dating someone right now and if something were to happened to either or us or if we were to break up, I don't know what would happen. I guess I would somehow manage to get through it but it would be hard. Great job with this piece
Comment Written 25-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you
Comment from stephenie khan
I really liked this poem as well, too...that a cowboy is set in his ways and the incompatibility of him and his lady friend...her wanting the finer things of life...and he wanted to be out on the ranch...I wonder if you are a cowboy...and perhaps lost love along the way...very nice poem
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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I really liked this poem as well, too...that a cowboy is set in his ways and the incompatibility of him and his lady friend...her wanting the finer things of life...and he wanted to be out on the ranch...I wonder if you are a cowboy...and perhaps lost love along the way...very nice poem
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review and comments yes i do have a ranch longhorns and we all lost love along the way at some point
Comment from mchapman
chapter 13 was very well written filled with heart felt emotions. the imagery is evident as is the message. wonderful reading. Thanks for sharing....Mary
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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chapter 13 was very well written filled with heart felt emotions. the imagery is evident as is the message. wonderful reading. Thanks for sharing....Mary
Comment Written 17-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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your welcome Mary
Comment from Realist101
I sure hope this is not a true story for you. If so, I am sorry. People like you, are what make our world a much better place, and it is sad when others do not see this. Keep your chin up my friend. And this is sad, but again, very well written...Susan
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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I sure hope this is not a true story for you. If so, I am sorry. People like you, are what make our world a much better place, and it is sad when others do not see this. Keep your chin up my friend. And this is sad, but again, very well written...Susan
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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thank you Susan
Comment from Heynonni
I like this piece very much and I think the message is clear to anyone raised in the western part of our country. We may have to leave the open spaces and go into the cities to earn our bread or educate our children, but when the responsibilities diminish, the choice becomes clear. Very nice work
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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I like this piece very much and I think the message is clear to anyone raised in the western part of our country. We may have to leave the open spaces and go into the cities to earn our bread or educate our children, but when the responsibilities diminish, the choice becomes clear. Very nice work
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thank you heynonni for reading
Comment from MikiB
Excellent writing on this Western poetry. The picture chosen is of some cowboys herding cattle. Story about a cowboy that got too old for the woman he had.
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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Excellent writing on this Western poetry. The picture chosen is of some cowboys herding cattle. Story about a cowboy that got too old for the woman he had.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thank you mikib for reading
Comment from Maria C.
Wow, this tells a great but sad love story. A man who has to choose between his love and who he is. Reminds me of the saying, "You can take the boy out of the country but you can't take the country out of the boy." I can identify. I could never go back to city living after living on and working our little piece of heaven on earth.
Enjoyed reading your work.
Blessings,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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Wow, this tells a great but sad love story. A man who has to choose between his love and who he is. Reminds me of the saying, "You can take the boy out of the country but you can't take the country out of the boy." I can identify. I could never go back to city living after living on and working our little piece of heaven on earth.
Enjoyed reading your work.
Blessings,
Maria C.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thank you Maria for reading
Comment from Amfunny
What a wonderful poem you have penned. It was a pleasure to read and review. Very well done. I especially liked these lines:
The end of this relationship was somewhat sad and cold
What made it end so sudden was, the cowboy just got old
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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What a wonderful poem you have penned. It was a pleasure to read and review. Very well done. I especially liked these lines:
The end of this relationship was somewhat sad and cold
What made it end so sudden was, the cowboy just got old
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thank you amfunny for your comments
Comment from Nicole Maye
Truly loved the last stanza:
The trials and tribulations that make us who we are
The teaching from our fathers that carry us this far
The heartaches we must carry to make it day by day
The love from that woman, he lost along the way
Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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Truly loved the last stanza:
The trials and tribulations that make us who we are
The teaching from our fathers that carry us this far
The heartaches we must carry to make it day by day
The love from that woman, he lost along the way
Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thanks again Nicole
Comment from hotstuff
Your poem is so sad. It really highlights the different perspective on life people have and what they value as important. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Technically, the rhyming scheme of abab is lost in the third stanza, otherwise the poem flowed smoothly.
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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Your poem is so sad. It really highlights the different perspective on life people have and what they value as important. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Technically, the rhyming scheme of abab is lost in the third stanza, otherwise the poem flowed smoothly.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
reply by the author on 14-May-2010
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thanks for your comments
