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Comment from JMRoland
Hi adewpearl,
I came upon this poem of yours, and just had to give it some stars. I didn't see it when you first put it up. It is a rare gem.
JMR
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
Hi adewpearl,
I came upon this poem of yours, and just had to give it some stars. I didn't see it when you first put it up. It is a rare gem.
JMR
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Thank you so much, JMR - how lovely to get a review of a poem no longer promoted and then such a generous review, too - you've made my afternoon :-) Brooke
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Brooke,
I apologize for the late review. Life sometimes gets hectic. The art and color scheme are very nice and your rispetto as usual well done. The flow in this poem is good. It gives the feeling curiosity and exploring our world. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
Hi Brooke,
I apologize for the late review. Life sometimes gets hectic. The art and color scheme are very nice and your rispetto as usual well done. The flow in this poem is good. It gives the feeling curiosity and exploring our world. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thank you, Becky :-) So glad you found meaning in this poem. Brooke
Comment from jack silver
Life is so full of beauty and wonder. You have really captured it here. you know I find it funny when people try to deny god. yet we invent from what we see in nature. so who made those things that we copy off? It would have to be someone with far more wisdom then us since after everything we find we find that there is so much more than we are able to understand.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
Life is so full of beauty and wonder. You have really captured it here. you know I find it funny when people try to deny god. yet we invent from what we see in nature. so who made those things that we copy off? It would have to be someone with far more wisdom then us since after everything we find we find that there is so much more than we are able to understand.
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks so much, Jack : _) You are most generous and most thoughtful, and I am most appreciative :-) Brooke
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no probs
Comment from fairydancer
Beautiful, Brooke.
Beautiful in:
meter and flow and rhyming
word choice and choice of subject
This is so well written and thought through.
Actually that just does not say what I want to say. If i had a six left, this would get it, it uplifted me, it was what i needed to read at this moment in time! THANKS - Cally x
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
Beautiful, Brooke.
Beautiful in:
meter and flow and rhyming
word choice and choice of subject
This is so well written and thought through.
Actually that just does not say what I want to say. If i had a six left, this would get it, it uplifted me, it was what i needed to read at this moment in time! THANKS - Cally x
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thank you, Cally. I am so pleased with your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
The technicalities of poetic forms escape me usually, but the Iambic meter is one I particularly like. This poem conveys your message of the wonder of the whole of creation very well.
Patrick
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
Hi Brooke,
The technicalities of poetic forms escape me usually, but the Iambic meter is one I particularly like. This poem conveys your message of the wonder of the whole of creation very well.
Patrick
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thank you, Patrick :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The beauty and the wisdom of the Earth are right in front of us, if we will only stop and take time to enjoy them. Once again you have written a very beauty poem to remind us of natures wonders.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
The beauty and the wisdom of the Earth are right in front of us, if we will only stop and take time to enjoy them. Once again you have written a very beauty poem to remind us of natures wonders.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks so much, Barbara :-) Brooke
Comment from Nicki_Mist
Another one that points out all the things to see and wonder at and love in Gods earth that He made for us. The water, ground, sky and everything around us is beautiful. Great imagery.
Hugs, Nicole
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
Another one that points out all the things to see and wonder at and love in Gods earth that He made for us. The water, ground, sky and everything around us is beautiful. Great imagery.
Hugs, Nicole
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Thanks so much, Nicole :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke A very lovely poem about nature, your words show a beautiful picture. The World is certainly a beautiful place, wonder why so so many are trying to destroy it. LOL Gaye
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
Hi Brooke A very lovely poem about nature, your words show a beautiful picture. The World is certainly a beautiful place, wonder why so so many are trying to destroy it. LOL Gaye
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Thank you, Gaye - glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
Comment from IanC
Being Italian the word "rispetto" caught my eye right away. You have presented a lovely poem. I love my times in the oak groves of northern California and you have helped me remember them. Well done
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
Being Italian the word "rispetto" caught my eye right away. You have presented a lovely poem. I love my times in the oak groves of northern California and you have helped me remember them. Well done
Comment Written 07-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Thanks, Ian, for your thoughtfulness :-) Brooke
Comment from paul in australia
I neglected to mention in my review of 'the ship' how I enjoy your illustrations, again another one. So much captured in so few words, I enjoyed this piece also. Regards Paul
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
I neglected to mention in my review of 'the ship' how I enjoy your illustrations, again another one. So much captured in so few words, I enjoyed this piece also. Regards Paul
Comment Written 07-May-2010
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
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Paul - I spend lots of time searching Fan Art for good illustrations - thanks for noticing. Brooke :-)
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It shows Brooke and engages the eye