Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Life"A book of Poetry & Writing
134 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
Yes within our lives, real friends will stay and never hurt one, in any way shape or form. Be positive within our lives and having friends who are very positive,and helpful is the best for us all.
Don't let others pull us down within our world.
Great Writing.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Yes within our lives, real friends will stay and never hurt one, in any way shape or form. Be positive within our lives and having friends who are very positive,and helpful is the best for us all.
Don't let others pull us down within our world.
Great Writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from laren
This is a nice poem with a deep message within. The author tell us how to go forward with life without fear.
Tell us how to dare to reach exit.
Congratulations!
Laren
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This is a nice poem with a deep message within. The author tell us how to go forward with life without fear.
Tell us how to dare to reach exit.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome,
Laren
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is a very inspirational poem. I love its positive message: you have it within you, to reach and fly high
So remove your defenses, go reach for the sky
Well done.
Anabella
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This is a very inspirational poem. I love its positive message: you have it within you, to reach and fly high
So remove your defenses, go reach for the sky
Well done.
Anabella
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from rudywalsh
Well done, another good poem, nice flow with a great meaning.
Very inspireing, i'm sure your poem will uplift people as they read through the lines, it's a shame you havn't put an image to go with your words.
We are here on Fanstory to learn and help each other, the more you say the better in some cases or most really,try and leave a little something in your Authers notes, it could be anything that just lets the reader know why you wrote this piece, and when replying to readers who have took time out to review your work then reply with something more than a thank you,even if you just explain why you wrote a piece or what it means, it will go such along way, I know that people on fanstory want to hear more about you, that's how you make fans and friends, after all you are a poet, and more often than not thats what a poet wants... To be heard, take care friend and have a great day. Rudy.
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Well done, another good poem, nice flow with a great meaning.
Very inspireing, i'm sure your poem will uplift people as they read through the lines, it's a shame you havn't put an image to go with your words.
We are here on Fanstory to learn and help each other, the more you say the better in some cases or most really,try and leave a little something in your Authers notes, it could be anything that just lets the reader know why you wrote this piece, and when replying to readers who have took time out to review your work then reply with something more than a thank you,even if you just explain why you wrote a piece or what it means, it will go such along way, I know that people on fanstory want to hear more about you, that's how you make fans and friends, after all you are a poet, and more often than not thats what a poet wants... To be heard, take care friend and have a great day. Rudy.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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Thanks Rudy yeat just tryin to write this is my first year so will see Gary
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Life' is very much a trumpet call to take action before it's too late. This talented poet has like the phoenix, risen to find his full potential. We would do well to follow his example. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this merit.
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'Life' is very much a trumpet call to take action before it's too late. This talented poet has like the phoenix, risen to find his full potential. We would do well to follow his example. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this merit.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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Thank you for reading Duchess
Comment from Carrie Smith
I agree, why live on the dark side- reach for the sky. Find that which in you to reach for the sky! Is not what life is all about? What a great and well written piece. Thoughtful and perceptive! Well done.
Carrie
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I agree, why live on the dark side- reach for the sky. Find that which in you to reach for the sky! Is not what life is all about? What a great and well written piece. Thoughtful and perceptive! Well done.
Carrie
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you Carrie
Comment from amada
These lines spoke to me "So remove your defenses, go reach for the sky Go forward with gusto show life what you are. I needed to hear them today.
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These lines spoke to me "So remove your defenses, go reach for the sky Go forward with gusto show life what you are. I needed to hear them today.
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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Thank you Amada
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece about unleashing the potentials within us. The structure of the poem is fine, except that i find it odd that some lines rhymed perfectly while others don't . Very inspirational work. kudos
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This is a nice piece about unleashing the potentials within us. The structure of the poem is fine, except that i find it odd that some lines rhymed perfectly while others don't . Very inspirational work. kudos
Comment Written 06-May-2010
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thank you Perp
Comment from Addy García
Congratulations on your poem, the phoenix rising from the ashes to be reborn.
I like driving, messages in your lines, show wisdom of the writer.
greetings from Mexico
GARCIA ADDY
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Congratulations on your poem, the phoenix rising from the ashes to be reborn.
I like driving, messages in your lines, show wisdom of the writer.
greetings from Mexico
GARCIA ADDY
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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thank you again Garcia
Comment from mmichelle97219
Hmmm this one is okay. I mean technically it didn't have anything wrong with it, but there just seems to be an emotional element missing that anchors it to the mind of the reader. Okay, but could be great.
Michelle
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Hmmm this one is okay. I mean technically it didn't have anything wrong with it, but there just seems to be an emotional element missing that anchors it to the mind of the reader. Okay, but could be great.
Michelle
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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what can i say MM some you like some you don't i like to think i write for myself and let other people read so thanks for reading
