Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "storm warning"A book of Poetry & Writing
178 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
This is a haunting tale of death at sea.
I enjoyed the vivid images you portray,
which put the reader right there with you.
I especially like the hopeful ending.
Your poem could also be seen as a metaphor
for life. Nice work.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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This is a haunting tale of death at sea.
I enjoyed the vivid images you portray,
which put the reader right there with you.
I especially like the hopeful ending.
Your poem could also be seen as a metaphor
for life. Nice work.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you nancy for your review
Comment from RazberryBullet
Very poignant! Liked these lines especially: someone has caught me, carries me high warm smiling faces with glows in their eyes I have come home now, at rest in this place The Sea, and its Sailors, we sail in God's grace.
Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Very poignant! Liked these lines especially: someone has caught me, carries me high warm smiling faces with glows in their eyes I have come home now, at rest in this place The Sea, and its Sailors, we sail in God's grace.
Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you Raz for the review and your comments
Comment from Judian James
As I read this, I immediately thought of the sixteen year old girl who was trying to sail around the world when she hit stormy seas and lost her mast. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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As I read this, I immediately thought of the sixteen year old girl who was trying to sail around the world when she hit stormy seas and lost her mast. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you for your review and comments Judian
Comment from wierdgrace
This is so wonderful, the structure is smooth to read, and goes perfect with the great artwork. I loved it, no errors and no revisions, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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This is so wonderful, the structure is smooth to read, and goes perfect with the great artwork. I loved it, no errors and no revisions, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you wierdgrace for your welcome comments
Comment from InHisownwrite
I always enjoy your writing..... and this is no exception..
Love the whole story behind this....because in reading your words, it was almost like being there... never been in a strom at sea, but I feel like I have.... love the last two verses.... Bryan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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I always enjoy your writing..... and this is no exception..
Love the whole story behind this....because in reading your words, it was almost like being there... never been in a strom at sea, but I feel like I have.... love the last two verses.... Bryan
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you Bryan for your review and the comments your friend Gary
Comment from mermaids
one can see clearly the storm and then being at peace in the end. I think of many difficulties in life that are similar to a storm at sea. You have a steady beat here and
good descriptive words.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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one can see clearly the storm and then being at peace in the end. I think of many difficulties in life that are similar to a storm at sea. You have a steady beat here and
good descriptive words.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you mermaids for your comments and review
Comment from kintesiegel
this is an emotional poem that makes the reader feel the rendering strength of the sea. It attempts to capture the last moments of life. a dramatic and good write
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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this is an emotional poem that makes the reader feel the rendering strength of the sea. It attempts to capture the last moments of life. a dramatic and good write
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thanks for the comments kintesiegel
Comment from fairydancer
Wow what an emotional and moving poem about the unpredictability of the oceans and nature.
Beautiful rich descriptions and suspense. Good flow.
Good one Gary - Cally :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Wow what an emotional and moving poem about the unpredictability of the oceans and nature.
Beautiful rich descriptions and suspense. Good flow.
Good one Gary - Cally :)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you so much for your review and comments Cally
Comment from Ronni
A very gripping and tension filled sea storm story
here. Starkly vivid descriptions enhance the suspense
and danger; the fierce fight to stay aflooat, near
surrender, and a llth hour rescue.
Fantastic presentation, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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A very gripping and tension filled sea storm story
here. Starkly vivid descriptions enhance the suspense
and danger; the fierce fight to stay aflooat, near
surrender, and a llth hour rescue.
Fantastic presentation, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thanks again for your review and comments ronni
Comment from lola29
You are such a wonderful poet. You spin and weave your words as though they are gold. Your poem reminds me of the 16 year old girl who was ailing around the world by herself. I wonder if she felt fear.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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You are such a wonderful poet. You spin and weave your words as though they are gold. Your poem reminds me of the 16 year old girl who was ailing around the world by herself. I wonder if she felt fear.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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thank you Lola for your comments and review
