Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Well done. A much needed message. There is a troubling, and thout provoking enlightenment here.
With the way the world has become, I have to say that our knowledge may be lost--to answer your poetic question.
Good Job.
Isaiah Ramesses
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Well done. A much needed message. There is a troubling, and thout provoking enlightenment here.
With the way the world has become, I have to say that our knowledge may be lost--to answer your poetic question.
Good Job.
Isaiah Ramesses
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Comment from geoniasha
Knowledge that is not written is, undoubtedly lost over time; secrets even more so. Who's to say how much of the unwritten knowledge of the past and those secrets never passed on are the answers to some of today's questions. A very poignant question. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. geo
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Knowledge that is not written is, undoubtedly lost over time; secrets even more so. Who's to say how much of the unwritten knowledge of the past and those secrets never passed on are the answers to some of today's questions. A very poignant question. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. geo
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You're welcome. geo
Comment from amada
I read a touch of mystery and blackness in these lines. How if someone is trying to hide something, afraid that with time all will be discovered. A cautious work.
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I read a touch of mystery and blackness in these lines. How if someone is trying to hide something, afraid that with time all will be discovered. A cautious work.
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Comment from Hitcher
I think we all carry and pass on those secrets whether we realize it or not, we are in many ways reflections of our parents and their beliefs and knowledge is imprinted from one generation to the next. Very nice!
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I think we all carry and pass on those secrets whether we realize it or not, we are in many ways reflections of our parents and their beliefs and knowledge is imprinted from one generation to the next. Very nice!
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Comment from Donna Thompson
To all unwritten things
that are passed by voice throughout the evolution of time
never to be written in books or carved on stone
will this generation pass the secrets of our forefathers foreword
to be carried over to their sons?
yes it will be carried over, one could only hope.. great job.
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To all unwritten things
that are passed by voice throughout the evolution of time
never to be written in books or carved on stone
will this generation pass the secrets of our forefathers foreword
to be carried over to their sons?
yes it will be carried over, one could only hope.. great job.
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Comment from Vicwhiskey
Good question, but I'd love to see some poetic rumination on the answer to that question. Which secrets? This is the beginning of a poem, it feels totally incomplete even the pharsing of the question suggests that there should be something else here, but for what's here there are no corrections necessary.
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Good question, but I'd love to see some poetic rumination on the answer to that question. Which secrets? This is the beginning of a poem, it feels totally incomplete even the pharsing of the question suggests that there should be something else here, but for what's here there are no corrections necessary.
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Comment from Helen Tan
There's this tone about your poems that pulls my emotions. I think your words evokes thoughts which I would otherwise not think of. I really enjoyed this, thanks.
To all unwritten things
that are passed by voice throughout the evolution of time
never to be written in books or carved on stone
I love these lines. Now I think about this, there are so many things people have told me that I find important and interesting BUT have not told anyone else nor have I written them down. Will I have time to do so? This is the reason why I started writing.
will this generation pass the secrets of our forefathers foreword
to be carried over to their sons?
Time to push on, to write and pass these unwritten words, secrets, knowledge down.
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There's this tone about your poems that pulls my emotions. I think your words evokes thoughts which I would otherwise not think of. I really enjoyed this, thanks.
To all unwritten things
that are passed by voice throughout the evolution of time
never to be written in books or carved on stone
I love these lines. Now I think about this, there are so many things people have told me that I find important and interesting BUT have not told anyone else nor have I written them down. Will I have time to do so? This is the reason why I started writing.
will this generation pass the secrets of our forefathers foreword
to be carried over to their sons?
Time to push on, to write and pass these unwritten words, secrets, knowledge down.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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Comment from M. Karol
The tradition of passing on the knowledge to the next generation has been lost with time. The written word rules the world today.
Well said
Madhvi
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The tradition of passing on the knowledge to the next generation has been lost with time. The written word rules the world today.
Well said
Madhvi
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Comment from rudywalsh
Well, even when word by book are handed down through time, they are more often than not lost, many a fine book written have been destroyed by the good old Christains over the last thousand years during the Inquisition.
And many unwritten things are twisted to suit those in power, words are very powerful and dangerous, a great way to manipulate the Masses.
Well done my friend, a very thought provoking Read, Rudy.
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Well, even when word by book are handed down through time, they are more often than not lost, many a fine book written have been destroyed by the good old Christains over the last thousand years during the Inquisition.
And many unwritten things are twisted to suit those in power, words are very powerful and dangerous, a great way to manipulate the Masses.
Well done my friend, a very thought provoking Read, Rudy.
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Comment from smileycloud
hey
with the passing of time; so much wisdom is lost; so much good is lost;some good is found too;but out with the old and in with the new is a very foolhardy way to live;very good poetry my friend
have a smiley day
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hey
with the passing of time; so much wisdom is lost; so much good is lost;some good is found too;but out with the old and in with the new is a very foolhardy way to live;very good poetry my friend
have a smiley day
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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