Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "To all unwritten things"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from tamarap2
"throughout the evolution of time"...? Mm Does time evolve? Maybe man evolves. Throughout evolution doesn't work. What about "through time" or "throughout time"? I think I would edit out evolution. I like the subject matter. Congrats on all time best!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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"throughout the evolution of time"...? Mm Does time evolve? Maybe man evolves. Throughout evolution doesn't work. What about "through time" or "throughout time"? I think I would edit out evolution. I like the subject matter. Congrats on all time best!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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thank you for reading
Comment from Nerdette
This is really interesting. Family traditions and things passed down are what tie many people of the present with their past ancestors. It helps us remember the essence of who we are or rather where we come from. Awesome work. I love this.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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This is really interesting. Family traditions and things passed down are what tie many people of the present with their past ancestors. It helps us remember the essence of who we are or rather where we come from. Awesome work. I love this.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
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thank you again Nerdette
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi deepwater,
This is an interesting poem... so true! History fades away as those with stories to tell pass on. I am glad my parents and grandparents shared this history with me... I wish I would have paid closer attention... and now it is my turn to pass it along. Thanks for your brilliant poem. It was a good reminder.
Cheers,
W ^-^
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Hi deepwater,
This is an interesting poem... so true! History fades away as those with stories to tell pass on. I am glad my parents and grandparents shared this history with me... I wish I would have paid closer attention... and now it is my turn to pass it along. Thanks for your brilliant poem. It was a good reminder.
Cheers,
W ^-^
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
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thanks again W^-^ for your comments and review
Comment from NadiaScrieva
Again, your poetry is filled with thoughtful questioning and is very stimulating to thought. Many should be able to relate to your words because of how open-ended and vaguely the ideas are presented.
Best,
Nadia
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Again, your poetry is filled with thoughtful questioning and is very stimulating to thought. Many should be able to relate to your words because of how open-ended and vaguely the ideas are presented.
Best,
Nadia
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
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thank you again Nadia
Comment from P. G. Simpkins
How true is that! very meaningful words, so many will have been lost that could have been captured, a very good message, I like this alot! short and sweet and has a point, well done : )
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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How true is that! very meaningful words, so many will have been lost that could have been captured, a very good message, I like this alot! short and sweet and has a point, well done : )
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Paul
Comment from Mª Luisa López Pisú
Muy buen escrito, vi mucha filosofa en tus palabras. Verso muy fluido y que me puso a pensar.
No hay que hacer ning¼n cambio. Saludos de Din¡mica
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Muy buen escrito, vi mucha filosofa en tus palabras. Verso muy fluido y que me puso a pensar.
No hay que hacer ning¼n cambio. Saludos de Din¡mica
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review Maria Gary
Comment from LadyWave
You've posed more great thought-provoking questions. I like the structure and format of your poem. It was very effective with the message you chose.
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You've posed more great thought-provoking questions. I like the structure and format of your poem. It was very effective with the message you chose.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Lady for this review Gary
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your profound question and liked your "carved in stone" hyperbole. I enjoy your black and white accompanying photographs, and this one is quite synergistic.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I admired your profound question and liked your "carved in stone" hyperbole. I enjoy your black and white accompanying photographs, and this one is quite synergistic.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for reading Joan
Comment from idnami
I like this quite a bit and it may be my favorite of your poems.
I especially enjoy how it is both uplifting and ominous. We pass on many traditions to future generations, some good, some not so much. Sins of the fathers and all that.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I like this quite a bit and it may be my favorite of your poems.
I especially enjoy how it is both uplifting and ominous. We pass on many traditions to future generations, some good, some not so much. Sins of the fathers and all that.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thanks again idnami
Comment from Dan103085
Another great poem, deepwater. This is so true. I cannot fathom how many gems of wisdom our forefathers have taken to their graves. When I speak to my grandfather I pick his brain about his time in the army and when he was in Korea. Even strangers who want to speak to. The best generation is dying off at an alarming rate and we have to get what we can before they go.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Another great poem, deepwater. This is so true. I cannot fathom how many gems of wisdom our forefathers have taken to their graves. When I speak to my grandfather I pick his brain about his time in the army and when he was in Korea. Even strangers who want to speak to. The best generation is dying off at an alarming rate and we have to get what we can before they go.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you dan for this review
