Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Riding to forget,"A book of Poetry & Writing
121 total reviews
Comment from Vickstarxx
hi there, A powerful poem that describes how a man deals with his issues in his work and solitude. Well written and structured. Vicki
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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hi there, A powerful poem that describes how a man deals with his issues in his work and solitude. Well written and structured. Vicki
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you Vicki
Comment from DrJane
This poem is very poignant. The imagery of the cowboy's life draws the reader in from the beginning. Very nice. Notes: Line 2: "laid"; Line 3: "that's"; Line 8: "cowboy's"; Line 9: "feeds"; Line 11: "that were down"; Line 13: "Life's"
Blessings,
Jane
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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This poem is very poignant. The imagery of the cowboy's life draws the reader in from the beginning. Very nice. Notes: Line 2: "laid"; Line 3: "that's"; Line 8: "cowboy's"; Line 9: "feeds"; Line 11: "that were down"; Line 13: "Life's"
Blessings,
Jane
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the comments Dr
Comment from laren
This is a great story poem which tell us about country life. It shows also a strong character, the cowboy.
His aparently simple thougth has a great significance to survival.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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This is a great story poem which tell us about country life. It shows also a strong character, the cowboy.
His aparently simple thougth has a great significance to survival.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review Laren
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from Begin Again
deepwater,
You told your story of the cowboy and how he connects to the land so differently than his wife very well. One could feel the ups and downs. Great job!
Carol
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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deepwater,
You told your story of the cowboy and how he connects to the land so differently than his wife very well. One could feel the ups and downs. Great job!
Carol
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you Carol
Comment from overthemoon
A well written story written in verse, though rather sad.found the rhyming was a little uneven but the reading flowed quite easily. the colouring and art work added nicely to the over all work.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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A well written story written in verse, though rather sad.found the rhyming was a little uneven but the reading flowed quite easily. the colouring and art work added nicely to the over all work.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you overthemoon
Comment from midgev
Wonderful interplay between this man's work ethic and his worries. Very down to earth images and great character development of this cowboy. I liked it very much. Midge
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Wonderful interplay between this man's work ethic and his worries. Very down to earth images and great character development of this cowboy. I liked it very much. Midge
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you Midge
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
This is quite an interesting take on the working cowboys life. I relate to it well having lived on a working ranch for many years myself. I'm not sure I agree with all your philosophy... a cowboy's life is not necessary lonely even though he may spend a lot of hours alone for he is usually very much at home on the range and wouldn't have it any other way. You did a great job, though, of painting a word picture of many parts of it.
Cheers, W ^-^
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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This is quite an interesting take on the working cowboys life. I relate to it well having lived on a working ranch for many years myself. I'm not sure I agree with all your philosophy... a cowboy's life is not necessary lonely even though he may spend a lot of hours alone for he is usually very much at home on the range and wouldn't have it any other way. You did a great job, though, of painting a word picture of many parts of it.
Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review W
Comment from Kaladore
I think that this was a very good poem with a nice flow and interesting tale. You have some errors, mainly dealing with possesive form but nothing glaring. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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I think that this was a very good poem with a nice flow and interesting tale. You have some errors, mainly dealing with possesive form but nothing glaring. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review
Comment from mchapman
what a beautiful tribute to the old cowboy. as a child I always watched cowboy movies and programs. your poem is a lovely well written piece. it has a great story line and imagery. thanks for sharing.....mary
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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what a beautiful tribute to the old cowboy. as a child I always watched cowboy movies and programs. your poem is a lovely well written piece. it has a great story line and imagery. thanks for sharing.....mary
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review Mary
Comment from Gideon Roth
Great job on this one as usual. I enjoyed this entire poem and it was well written from start to finish. Although the entire piece was wonderful the lines I pasted below were extra special to me. Often times when stress and life's bumps in the road are especially rough I rely on this portion of the poem to help me through the situation.
Keep up the great writing...Tim
He rides and thinks back over, the days of sweat and forlorn,
Knowing, Coffee and friends are waiting to help him through this storm
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Great job on this one as usual. I enjoyed this entire poem and it was well written from start to finish. Although the entire piece was wonderful the lines I pasted below were extra special to me. Often times when stress and life's bumps in the road are especially rough I rely on this portion of the poem to help me through the situation.
Keep up the great writing...Tim
He rides and thinks back over, the days of sweat and forlorn,
Knowing, Coffee and friends are waiting to help him through this storm
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Thank you for the review Gideon
