You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet
Short devotional based on John 1:43-5015 total reviews
Comment from JudithMarie
Judy this works very well. It is inspirational as well as it reveals scripture to your readers. It doesn't preach. It has a great flow. No excess words, it keeps directly on the scripture referred to, which can be challenging. I like the inclusion of the personal story. Well done. JudithMarie
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
  |
Judy this works very well. It is inspirational as well as it reveals scripture to your readers. It doesn't preach. It has a great flow. No excess words, it keeps directly on the scripture referred to, which can be challenging. I like the inclusion of the personal story. Well done. JudithMarie
Comment Written 01-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
-
Thanks, Judy. I look forward to developing this style of writing with you. -Judy
Comment from JW
No - we haven't seen anything yet. And I am eagerly waiting for the final grand conclusion to this great friendship.
This was a good story with a great analogy. Very well written. Great Job.
Jonathon
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
|
No - we haven't seen anything yet. And I am eagerly waiting for the final grand conclusion to this great friendship.
This was a good story with a great analogy. Very well written. Great Job.
Jonathon
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
-
Thank you, Jonathon. Your comments and generous review are so appreciated. -Judy
Comment from Christina_Dufek
What a great idea Judy! And what an easy way to witness as well. Not only are you taking away from your daily bible studies, but the rest of us are as well. Also, I think it's a great way to help God's Word sink in. It helps to make it even more memorable!
And I enjoyed reading the personal story you shared.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
|
What a great idea Judy! And what an easy way to witness as well. Not only are you taking away from your daily bible studies, but the rest of us are as well. Also, I think it's a great way to help God's Word sink in. It helps to make it even more memorable!
And I enjoyed reading the personal story you shared.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
-
Thanks, Christina. I am thinking about putting this in book fashion here on FanStory. I have two of them out there now. Thanks for the encouragment. I am trying to do one per week/day. -Judy
Comment from adewpearl
This devotional does an excellent job of connecting a personal experience to a Biblical story - there is nothing forced about the connection you draw; in fact, it is most thoughtful. I like the fact that you don't draw this out - a daily devotional should make a strong point without being long-winded, and you do that extremely well. Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
This devotional does an excellent job of connecting a personal experience to a Biblical story - there is nothing forced about the connection you draw; in fact, it is most thoughtful. I like the fact that you don't draw this out - a daily devotional should make a strong point without being long-winded, and you do that extremely well. Brooke
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thank you for writing,Brooke. I appreciate the comments. I am anxious to try my hand at another. -Judy
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
You created an interesting parallel in relation to not always realising that we have just met a real friend.
Yes, we do have to hear what the other person is saying before we decide whether or not we want them as a friend.
As you point out a similarity of circumstances can create that link.
The short story/devotional is simple, succinct and striking.
Juliette
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
You created an interesting parallel in relation to not always realising that we have just met a real friend.
Yes, we do have to hear what the other person is saying before we decide whether or not we want them as a friend.
As you point out a similarity of circumstances can create that link.
The short story/devotional is simple, succinct and striking.
Juliette
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Juliette, thank you for the encouraging remarks. Thank you for taking the time to review this piece. -Judy
Comment from BJean
This is a nice thought and devotion on Nathanael and his spiritual insight to follow Jesus. Just like people, sometimes it takes time to want to get to know Jesus and accept his love. Nice little devotion to make one ponder. Love, Jean
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
This is a nice thought and devotion on Nathanael and his spiritual insight to follow Jesus. Just like people, sometimes it takes time to want to get to know Jesus and accept his love. Nice little devotion to make one ponder. Love, Jean
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thank you, Jean. Your encouraging words will push me onward. Thank you. -Judy
Comment from lola29
Judy, I always enjoy your work, and I'm very impressed with your new style. I think you will invite a lot of people to hear the good news and perhaps off an invitation for His guidance. Bravo!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
Judy, I always enjoy your work, and I'm very impressed with your new style. I think you will invite a lot of people to hear the good news and perhaps off an invitation for His guidance. Bravo!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thanks Lola. I am glad you think I did OK with this style . Thank you for reviewing again. -Judy
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Judy,
This is a very nice piece of devotional based on that passage from John. I like the idea and I have been wanting to do something like this too. My friend Kingskid has been doing chapters from Psalms too. Good job.
Anabella
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
Hi Judy,
This is a very nice piece of devotional based on that passage from John. I like the idea and I have been wanting to do something like this too. My friend Kingskid has been doing chapters from Psalms too. Good job.
Anabella
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thank you for the encouragement and the review. I will keep working at this. -Judy
Comment from Max Edon
I enjoyed reading this. I think it is a great idea to give modern-day examples of Biblical passages. You made the story come alive.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
I enjoyed reading this. I think it is a great idea to give modern-day examples of Biblical passages. You made the story come alive.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thank you very much for the encouragement. -Judy
-
You are welcome!
Comment from sugardog
Very fun to try something new. I think you did a nice job writing this devotional. New to me too, as I am not too familiar with the way those are written, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. Loved your sweet descriptions! Good luck on your new journey with writing ;) Dana
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
|
Very fun to try something new. I think you did a nice job writing this devotional. New to me too, as I am not too familiar with the way those are written, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. Loved your sweet descriptions! Good luck on your new journey with writing ;) Dana
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
-
Thank you, Dana. I appreciate your comments. -Judy
