Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

How beautiful! It makes you want to believe in miracles such as wishing on stars. You captured the love and joy of the moment. It gives us all hope of finding love. Now I just have to find that darn star!
deb

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

Thank you, Deb - yep, I'm still looking for the star that works too. LOL Brooke :-)

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this poem made me smile as a I read it. This was another of your poetic pieces that just resonate so smoothly to a poetic vogue. I enjoy reading your poetic artistry and writing reviews for them... John

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

Thank you, John - I'm so glad this elicited a smile :-) Brooke

Comment from spiceydog

Excellent

I was captivated by your use of dark and light - the juxtapostion and interplay - a wonderful illustration of the feelings we all have of longing and aloneness, and the transforming light that love brings into our lives. Thank you for the inspiration - I am going to keep wishing on that star!

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

Thank you, spiceydog- hey, you never know when a wish might come true :-) Brooke

Comment from kleblanc

Excellent

Very pretty poem. I enjoyed reading it and you picked a beautiful picture and nice coolor scheme to compliment it. Great work. Keep it up. Kristy

 Comment Written 01-May-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

Thanks so much, Kristy :-) Brooke

Comment from Hitcher

Exceptional

Now this little offering is an absolute gem Brooke, the presentation is stunningly beautiful[well done] friend. The poem itself is exceptional, awesome visuals, wonderful flow, your repeated descending line was brilliant, I loved the last stanza most of all friend, worthy of six stars!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 01-May-2010

Hitch, what a lovely, generous review :-) I'm going to just sit back and smile awhile. :-) Thank you. Brooke

Comment from SamanthaD.

Excellent

Love it, Love it! I think I should go outside and find a shooting star to wish upon. I love the way you wrote this quatern. It's a conforting read, if that makes sense. Excellent!
Love, Ssamantha

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thank you, Samantha. I do understand - thank you for sharing that :-) Brooke

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is musical and mystical and I love the love theme here. You capture a feeling of being loved. You have such a steady beat and great flow of words and feelings.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thanks so much, Elaine - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from fairydancer

Excellent

Hi Brooke.
Your beautiful word choice and that lovely writing style of yours have once again combined to form a little gem of a poem.
Great rhyming and flow as well.
Take care - Cally :)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thanks so much, Cally. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

A touch of delight graces this poem about how wishes upon a star may come true. How we all hope that these small minor miracles will be afforded to us. We all do it. We see a falling star and make a wish. Your Quatern is lovely and to my eye perfectly executed. It is a love poem full with the tenderest side of love. Almost shy and yet so beautifully written. Rose.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thanks so much, Rose :-) Your kind words are most appreciated :-) Brooke

Comment from Colin Douglas

Exceptional

Pure brilliance. The repeating line is perfect for this poem, as is its ending alteration. Your words are always so powerful, and your meter soothing.

Colin

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010

Thank you so much, Colin - I just love the quatern form - it makes any poem sound pretty, almost like cheating. LOL You are most generous :-) Brooke