The Final Deal
An Angel Asks to be Reassigned.31 total reviews
Comment from Readywriter52
Not many men have to guts to argue with Saint Peter or an angel, but he did. I guess being a lawyer made him believe that he could persuade the devil do what he wanted.
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Not many men have to guts to argue with Saint Peter or an angel, but he did. I guess being a lawyer made him believe that he could persuade the devil do what he wanted.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
Comment from sgalletti
I honestly don't know what to make of this. All I can say is that I agree with you on many points and disagree on others. One nit: gone(,). Wish I could get into this more because I have LOTS of opinions about attorneys and more...Sue
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I honestly don't know what to make of this. All I can say is that I agree with you on many points and disagree on others. One nit: gone(,). Wish I could get into this more because I have LOTS of opinions about attorneys and more...Sue
Comment Written 01-May-2010
Comment from Terrilynn
No offense taken. This story reminds me of the numerous jokes on behalf of all attorneys every where. Something about an attorney and a bottomfeeder. It fits the contest entry and the terrific picture of the sexy angel. The fact that Mr. Thornton wanted to go in the other direction makes me laugh. Cute story.
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No offense taken. This story reminds me of the numerous jokes on behalf of all attorneys every where. Something about an attorney and a bottomfeeder. It fits the contest entry and the terrific picture of the sexy angel. The fact that Mr. Thornton wanted to go in the other direction makes me laugh. Cute story.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
Comment from MyYiaYia
I liked this one, but he sure wasn't listening, was he? I believe he will get his just desserts. Nice job of writing and I didn't find any SPAG. Good luck in the contest.
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I liked this one, but he sure wasn't listening, was he? I believe he will get his just desserts. Nice job of writing and I didn't find any SPAG. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
Comment from Donna Thompson
dicipline (discipline)
This is a very interesting take on the contest. I love it.. only spag found above.. great job overall. good luck to you in the contest
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dicipline (discipline)
This is a very interesting take on the contest. I love it.. only spag found above.. great job overall. good luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 01-May-2010
Comment from Annmuma
Sort of the latest "lawyer" joke and they always get a smile from me. Good job. Well written and creative. Good luck in the contest. ann
her mid bicep --suggest: mid-bicep
forty eight hours --suggest: forty-eight
ill gotten --suggest: ill-gotten
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Sort of the latest "lawyer" joke and they always get a smile from me. Good job. Well written and creative. Good luck in the contest. ann
her mid bicep --suggest: mid-bicep
forty eight hours --suggest: forty-eight
ill gotten --suggest: ill-gotten
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
Comment from TexAnn
You imagined the angel very well and liked her gumption!
No offense, but ending might be predictable coming from an attorney, but I like it!
Made me smile, thanks, TexAnn
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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You imagined the angel very well and liked her gumption!
No offense, but ending might be predictable coming from an attorney, but I like it!
Made me smile, thanks, TexAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. LOL, yes, they are pretty predictable, aren't they, lol. - John
Comment from kath79
Ha! I loved this...great idea, brilliantly written. Jealous,jealous,jealous! Lol. The dialogue is sharp and it was a pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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Ha! I loved this...great idea, brilliantly written. Jealous,jealous,jealous! Lol. The dialogue is sharp and it was a pleasure to read!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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LOl. Glad you liked it Kath. It was fun to write and a great photo to be inspired by. - John
Comment from bookishfabler
LOL. This was a hot one. I started reading it and was interupted by an emergency yesterday, and had to came back this morning as soon as I grabbed my coffee. What fun.
"Heaven(.) (A)re you kidding(?) I always expected to be in the tropics, if you know what I mean."
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LOL. This was a hot one. I started reading it and was interupted by an emergency yesterday, and had to came back this morning as soon as I grabbed my coffee. What fun.
"Heaven(.) (A)re you kidding(?) I always expected to be in the tropics, if you know what I mean."
hugs
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
Comment from Vladilynn
You're just crazy John!!! You just cracked me out.ROFLMAO
Okay, I hope you'll not be beat up by the religious group here. The last part is hilarious, I can tell that he's a very stubborn attorney~ he still want the last taste of wildness. Hrmmmmmp!
Good luck to you!!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
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You're just crazy John!!! You just cracked me out.ROFLMAO
Okay, I hope you'll not be beat up by the religious group here. The last part is hilarious, I can tell that he's a very stubborn attorney~ he still want the last taste of wildness. Hrmmmmmp!
Good luck to you!!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
