Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Loving Heart"...musings on us
3 total reviews
Comment from Gigi love byrd
As the reader I understood the first line to be his kind words, you capture well the lovely anxiety of one waiting for their love to return, I just thought it show a mutual feeling by saying something like "were in love" in the last stanza, but either way great poem!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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As the reader I understood the first line to be his kind words, you capture well the lovely anxiety of one waiting for their love to return, I just thought it show a mutual feeling by saying something like "were in love" in the last stanza, but either way great poem!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reviewing this older piece - it was my first posting back in April. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from fastdigits
Short poems always difficult to
review, but in fourteen words
you have shaped all the ingredients
of the warmness and tenderness of
what love is, an to boot thrown
in a rhyme.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Short poems always difficult to
review, but in fourteen words
you have shaped all the ingredients
of the warmness and tenderness of
what love is, an to boot thrown
in a rhyme.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from Josipher32
Mustangpatty1029,
"Loving Heart" was a very well written piece for this "Short Love POem" contest. I wish you the very best with your entry.
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Mustangpatty1029,
"Loving Heart" was a very well written piece for this "Short Love POem" contest. I wish you the very best with your entry.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. I hope that this first posted poem and contest entry will find some love of its own.
