Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Cajungirl
What a beautiful poem with a perfect picture to match. Thoughts of giving your heart to a new love can be a bit overwhelming. But in time, if it is true love trust will wash away the doubts. Thanks for sharing.
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What a beautiful poem with a perfect picture to match. Thoughts of giving your heart to a new love can be a bit overwhelming. But in time, if it is true love trust will wash away the doubts. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from marijmd
If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be,
great two verses here - I think this is always the question - do we put our selves out there - to be loved or not loved. What is worse not knowing or the despair of rejection.
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If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring?
Or slowly destroy the life within with promises that will never be,
great two verses here - I think this is always the question - do we put our selves out there - to be loved or not loved. What is worse not knowing or the despair of rejection.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi GW,
Nice serene photo.
Sad, and hopeless - you bring out those emotions in this very well.
I like the way you leave it at the end, about the winds of change, as in the title.
Nice read.
Cheers &
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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Hi GW,
Nice serene photo.
Sad, and hopeless - you bring out those emotions in this very well.
I like the way you leave it at the end, about the winds of change, as in the title.
Nice read.
Cheers &
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from despiser
Deepwater
This is very deep water here (pun intended). I like the way each verse flows into the next capping at the end with the title. Very clear imagery. Quite different than my chapter of the same name lol.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Deepwater
This is very deep water here (pun intended). I like the way each verse flows into the next capping at the end with the title. Very clear imagery. Quite different than my chapter of the same name lol.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thanks for the review despiser
Comment from robin1
Beautifully written, Deepwater. The imagery you've chosen to express your feelings resonates with truth and gives power to your poem. Your words are simple, yet deep, and there is a cadence to them that I rarely see these days. It is truly refreshing to read a poem that is not the random angry musings of an adolescent mind, or of a mind stuck in adolescence. robin1
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Beautifully written, Deepwater. The imagery you've chosen to express your feelings resonates with truth and gives power to your poem. Your words are simple, yet deep, and there is a cadence to them that I rarely see these days. It is truly refreshing to read a poem that is not the random angry musings of an adolescent mind, or of a mind stuck in adolescence. robin1
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you Robin for your comments and review
Comment from Abba Lin
Hi deepwater, Enjoyed reading your poem.. great words and flow. Those are words that a lover does ponder as he gives his heart away. great job.. Love Lin
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Hi deepwater, Enjoyed reading your poem.. great words and flow. Those are words that a lover does ponder as he gives his heart away. great job.. Love Lin
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you Lin
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
DW, this could have been a six! Dang it! You need to omit the comma at the end of the last line and either leave it unpunctuated or with a period, indicating the poem's end.
Pea
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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DW, this could have been a six! Dang it! You need to omit the comma at the end of the last line and either leave it unpunctuated or with a period, indicating the poem's end.
Pea
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thanks again sweet pea for your comments and review
Comment from pbrprasad
Something I feel something difference.It all about state human mind ."Like ripples betraying still waters, " this quoted portion I could not see any where and it is unic.
"will the cold winds of change blow upon our earthly spirits"
quote above is praise worthy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Something I feel something difference.It all about state human mind ."Like ripples betraying still waters, " this quoted portion I could not see any where and it is unic.
"will the cold winds of change blow upon our earthly spirits"
quote above is praise worthy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you for your review pb
Comment from Monte Carbolic
This piece is without a doubt very personal to you, but you managed to capture your feelings in your words in a way where it is accessible to all readers. Overall, a very good poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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This piece is without a doubt very personal to you, but you managed to capture your feelings in your words in a way where it is accessible to all readers. Overall, a very good poem.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review
Comment from LostAgain
I think you did a wonderful job here. I loved everything from the word choice to the flow and even the ultimate theme of it all. There is something so peaceful about this poem, but at the same time there is a longing and a questioning of love itself. Something I so often do. Once again, excellent work!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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I think you did a wonderful job here. I loved everything from the word choice to the flow and even the ultimate theme of it all. There is something so peaceful about this poem, but at the same time there is a longing and a questioning of love itself. Something I so often do. Once again, excellent work!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you for your welcome review Lost
