Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Christine B.
Lost loves never leave. We arrive, bearing ourselves like a tide, and inquiring about what we wish; the receiving interest, that moveable buoy of passion, may only retreat as a ruthless storm. The natural simplicity of this piece is enjoyable, in the middle of all the hullabaloo.
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Lost loves never leave. We arrive, bearing ourselves like a tide, and inquiring about what we wish; the receiving interest, that moveable buoy of passion, may only retreat as a ruthless storm. The natural simplicity of this piece is enjoyable, in the middle of all the hullabaloo.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from rrabinow
Wonderfully written poem. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like the line like ripple betraying still waters, will you stay with me? Great use of description in your poem as well as metaphores.
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Wonderfully written poem. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like the line like ripple betraying still waters, will you stay with me? Great use of description in your poem as well as metaphores.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi deepwater - A very well written free verse about a lost love, and someone who still pines after that love. I thought the picture a bit misleading - I initially thought you were looking at your own reflection - like Narcissus. But as the poem went on, of course, it all became clear. Very well written. Kind regards Dorothy x
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Hi deepwater - A very well written free verse about a lost love, and someone who still pines after that love. I thought the picture a bit misleading - I initially thought you were looking at your own reflection - like Narcissus. But as the poem went on, of course, it all became clear. Very well written. Kind regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
This free verse flows poetically in a way that reminds me of the ocean's rhythm. To me its is expressing the uncertainty about a lover's commitment.
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This free verse flows poetically in a way that reminds me of the ocean's rhythm. To me its is expressing the uncertainty about a lover's commitment.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from sunnilicious
Love and romance can make us all feel insecure. That is a well expressed poem. Expressive. Sincere. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice work.
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Love and romance can make us all feel insecure. That is a well expressed poem. Expressive. Sincere. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from thee-name
A good romantic start to your poem.
I SEE YOUR REFLECTION UPON WATERS SO STILL AND TRANQUIL
YOU ARE: MY LOVE, MY LIFE, MY SOUL MATE?
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A good romantic start to your poem.
I SEE YOUR REFLECTION UPON WATERS SO STILL AND TRANQUIL
YOU ARE: MY LOVE, MY LIFE, MY SOUL MATE?
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is such a lovely poem, it's spiritual tone, and tender love images are gorgeous. I love the presentation, and the style. The whole together is perfect. xsx sandra
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That is such a lovely poem, it's spiritual tone, and tender love images are gorgeous. I love the presentation, and the style. The whole together is perfect. xsx sandra
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from Titan Black
I like the optimism. For, even
though you questioned should you
speak of love or the negative side;
you chose to move forward and dream.
Your poetic alliteration was on time.
And basically you did your thing. Keep
writing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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I like the optimism. For, even
though you questioned should you
speak of love or the negative side;
you chose to move forward and dream.
Your poetic alliteration was on time.
And basically you did your thing. Keep
writing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Glasstruth
The winds of change are hard to predict. As your writing shows that through the questions you ask. Uncertainty is a real killer in a relationship that's on the brink of change. Nice flow. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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The winds of change are hard to predict. As your writing shows that through the questions you ask. Uncertainty is a real killer in a relationship that's on the brink of change. Nice flow. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Welcome Les
Comment from DerivedBetter
I think we all wonder each and all of these questions when we start a new relationship, or even if things change in a solid one. Great poem. thanks for sharing,
Tony
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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I think we all wonder each and all of these questions when we start a new relationship, or even if things change in a solid one. Great poem. thanks for sharing,
Tony
Comment Written 27-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
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Thank you Tony
