Comment from Halfree

Excellent

How wonderfully said. I suspect I should go on with a flow of words but you just showed me how powerful a few words can be. My few words, I like it and felt it,ah, the magic of poetry.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010

hehe thank you much :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello shelley,
So you are looking for an everlasting love that can fill your cup half full of happiness or all the way to the brim.

( So can you write a poem of how you could fill or half way fill your cup to be happy)?

Gert

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2010

i'll take that challenge :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Apr-2010

I will be waiting shelley
Smiles
Gert

Comment from writealot2

Excellent

Such a good description of how one feels when others all around are in love; and suddenly when it comes to you...there is nothing quite like that feeling. Good Poem

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010

thank you much! :-)

Comment from lola29

Excellent

I think you've captured that mysterious feeling brilliantly. You're right, the sensatons are euphoric, and the best high ever. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010

thanx lola! :)