Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi L&P,

It is hard to believe that he is so arrogant as to go to another country and tell them what they need to do.
Your poem has a clear message and a nice flow. Though the truth, a hard pill to swallow, you have described well the serious state of our affairs. Thank you for sharing.

Becky

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2010

I know. If he wasn't doing the same thing at home, I could understand because we are fighting for them. Thank you dear friend for standing with me. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas

Excellent

To leave a mark in history
He will
and it won't be a good one

{ results are more important that public welfare- a thought of political insight is woven well in your poem. The grip on theme is strong}

Well done

K

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2010

Thank you K for reading. Blessings, Barbara

Comment from toni guerrero

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your very informative piece. Good work
on it. Your poem had good concise statements and flow to it. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2010

Thank you so much Tony for your kind words. Blessings. Barbara