Close Your Eyes and Dream
Where innocence soothes the mind....59 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write for the fairy tale contest. I think you did a very creative job writing it and you included some clever and fun twists and turns. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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This is a good write for the fairy tale contest. I think you did a very creative job writing it and you included some clever and fun twists and turns. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my fairytale. It is one chapter of a series of stories and a funny little leprechaun. Smiles to you!
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Fairy tales do come true. It can happen to you. If you're young at heart. You can go to extremes with impossible schemes, you can laugh when your dreams fall apart at the seams. And life gets more exciting with each passing day. Love is either in your heart or on its way." If only we believe. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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"Fairy tales do come true. It can happen to you. If you're young at heart. You can go to extremes with impossible schemes, you can laugh when your dreams fall apart at the seams. And life gets more exciting with each passing day. Love is either in your heart or on its way." If only we believe. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Smiles to you my friend! Guess it's about time for me to slip into tangled webs we weave and start writing another thriller and creep everyone out! lol Hope you are doing fine....Smiles to you!
Comment from Lyn Peters
Such an enjoyable tale! I loved the way you showed Shannon's conversion from oh-so-grown disbeliever when Frankie made his appearance. You work flows so beautifully, your descriptions are so vivid. I look forward to continuing to enjoy your work. Best regards.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Such an enjoyable tale! I loved the way you showed Shannon's conversion from oh-so-grown disbeliever when Frankie made his appearance. You work flows so beautifully, your descriptions are so vivid. I look forward to continuing to enjoy your work. Best regards.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I really appreciate your kindness. I am glad that you enjoyed this little fantasy as well. I hope to gather them all together and self publish for my grandchildren. Smiles to you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Fantasy Fiction speaks about fruition effect of activities of innocence on and about directive closing eyes and dream through orderly narrative taletelling with progression thru' plot development, fostering thematic promotional contribution through dialogues realistic and contributory, followed by catchy and interesting beginning and catchy curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This Fantasy Fiction speaks about fruition effect of activities of innocence on and about directive closing eyes and dream through orderly narrative taletelling with progression thru' plot development, fostering thematic promotional contribution through dialogues realistic and contributory, followed by catchy and interesting beginning and catchy curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this little fantasy world. I plan on trying to self publish all the Frankie stories for my grandchildren. Appreciate your comments!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Once again I enjoyed ready your fantasy. Very well written, like the Irish twist to the dialogue. So nice when everything happens just the way it is supposed to in fairy tales.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Once again I enjoyed ready your fantasy. Very well written, like the Irish twist to the dialogue. So nice when everything happens just the way it is supposed to in fairy tales.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this little fantasy world. I plan on trying to self publish all the Frankie stories for my grandchildren. Appreciate your comments!
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You are welcome. I am sure that will make a nice children's book.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Lepracheun and golden coins that can make dreams come true: "
In the distance, it sounded like someone was whistling an Irish tune. Frankie was headed home, pleased with today's adventure" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Lepracheun and golden coins that can make dreams come true: "
In the distance, it sounded like someone was whistling an Irish tune. Frankie was headed home, pleased with today's adventure" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this little fantasy world. I plan on trying to self publish all the Frankie stories for my grandchildren. Appreciate your comments!
Comment from Earl Corp
This seemed like a cross between the Wizard of Oz and Walt Disney World. The only thing missing was "And they all lived happily ever after." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This seemed like a cross between the Wizard of Oz and Walt Disney World. The only thing missing was "And they all lived happily ever after." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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There are a whole series of Frankie stories and this is one of the last. I hope to self publish them for my grandchildren. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really impressive nice job and is this a remake kind of or normal? but any ways keep writing and stay safe have a good good day
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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this is really really impressive nice job and is this a remake kind of or normal? but any ways keep writing and stay safe have a good good day
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I've reposted the Frankie stories because I am hoping to finish them and self publish for my grandchildren. Not sure how all that is done but I have high hopes. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Comment from Readywriter52
It seems to me, you took a bunch of fairy tales and threw them together. It is fun to pretend. That is one of the benefits of being a child.
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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It seems to me, you took a bunch of fairy tales and threw them together. It is fun to pretend. That is one of the benefits of being a child.
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Readywriter,
Thank you so much for taking the time to rad and enjoy my little story. It was fun to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sally Carter
Wow, Carol - a REAL fairy story if ever I read one!
Quite enchanting, and with such believable dialogue between the two girls. This had every ingredient a fairy story could possibly need. I loved the mix of real and pretend, rather than having the piece just set in the past.
I didn't notice any nits, though personally I would not have written "Robin" with a capital, as it is a species rather than a name. But it's no issue really.
Great entry, as we have come to expect from you.
Best wishes. Sally
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Wow, Carol - a REAL fairy story if ever I read one!
Quite enchanting, and with such believable dialogue between the two girls. This had every ingredient a fairy story could possibly need. I loved the mix of real and pretend, rather than having the piece just set in the past.
I didn't notice any nits, though personally I would not have written "Robin" with a capital, as it is a species rather than a name. But it's no issue really.
Great entry, as we have come to expect from you.
Best wishes. Sally
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 06-May-2010
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Sally,
Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
