Comment from williamdavis

Exceptional

wow... I don't do "WOW" very often. I just found this web-site. I really like it. Hope to get to know some of my fellow writers. You are very talented, I see why you are #1. God bless. Bill...

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2010

welcome, Bill - I'm so happy to be among the first to greet you to a site that has come to mean a great deal to me - I"ve met such good friends here and found some excellent writers. I just stumbled on it through a facebook ad a year and a half ago - I hope your experience is as positive as mine :-) Brooke

Comment from HAWordsmith

Excellent

What a lovely proposal. Vivid imagery and flows so well that this is truly a pleasure to read. I love the making of the bridge from the rainbow...such a beautiful thought. Thank you for this posting. Many blessings.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

Many blessings to you, too, my poet friend :-) Brooke

Comment from flyboy130

Excellent

I'll give to you vast ocean's edge where deepest waters meet blue sky,and if yoy make your true love's pledge'I'll take you where the eagles fly.
That is great. I just want to keep saying it over and over again. You inspire me a lot.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from Frozen Fire

Exceptional

I think this is very romantic and inspiring. I love your choice of words and how they were so masterfully put together. This piece is an easy, light read, but very detailed and passionate at the same time.
Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

Comment from Stephen C Winter (Vs

Excellent

How Romantic and so full of vivid imagery you capture the readers heart and make it feel as though it is especially written to them, Now Brooke you know I bat for the other team LOL. I especially love I'll spin you robes of spider's silk
with threads of love in their design,
as smooth as baths of buttermilk,
if only you will say you're mine....simple perfection.
Sadly I have given you my quota of sixes, although you truly desrerve one for this lovely read.
Steve

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

Thank you, Steve. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :-) Brooke

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

Hi brooke,

I read this 'marry me' poem. I enjoyed it. Got caught in the imagery and the rhymes and the patterns pulled me along down the path to the end, where I was pleased with the outcome and thought, well that's a nice way to start the morning.

Nice poem.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

So glad you enjoyed my little proposal :-) Thanks so much. Brooke

Comment from Gaye Hemsley

Excellent

Hi Brooke How romantic, lovely rhyming. really old fashioned and delightful The wods flow beautifully. I love the choise of artwork Cheers Gaye

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

Gaye, it is good to see you!! Thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Dustman6180

Excellent

I'm afraid I'm already married, Brooke. But, I appreciate the thought. Whoever, you were writing this beautiful poem to, you will undoubtedly be honeymooning soon. Well done. Dusty

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

thanks so much, Dusty. All the good guys come with pesky wives - this is just getting depressing! LOL I wish it were written to someone, anyone. :-) Brooke

Comment from perunest

Excellent

A better proposal I've never heard - your words
bridge the earthly and the magical lands of
sweet promises and lovely dreams. This is
a most lovely poem and sweet whispers of love.

Carolyn

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2010

Thank you, Carolyn - I appreciate your kind response to this proposal :-) Brooke

Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi Brooke,
There is no end to that wonderful imagination you have is there?
Robes of spiders milk. Bath's of buttermilk.
The art is awesome and makes a great presentation for your poem. A pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.

Becky

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2010

Thank you, Becky - I'm so glad you enjoyed the scenes I created :-) Brooke