Riches of the Tide
a florette91 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
i love the artwork it is perfect for your poem
I love the flow of the poem
Iyouhave away with words the move like the tide as you wrpote one evr knows what will rush in but for ceryain it will go back out there is a message with in this poem
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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i love the artwork it is perfect for your poem
I love the flow of the poem
Iyouhave away with words the move like the tide as you wrpote one evr knows what will rush in but for ceryain it will go back out there is a message with in this poem
this is a good write.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Misscookie. I'm so glad you found a message in this poem :-) Brooke
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your welcome,have a nice evening.
Comment from L.lora
Brooke this is simply delightful.
You've given us the chance to walk
along the beach with you, to explore
what has been washed ashore. Your
descriptive words have colored the
images in our minds, such a precious
gift you give with your crafting of
this respite in time. no nits or spags.
Lora
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Brooke this is simply delightful.
You've given us the chance to walk
along the beach with you, to explore
what has been washed ashore. Your
descriptive words have colored the
images in our minds, such a precious
gift you give with your crafting of
this respite in time. no nits or spags.
Lora
Comment Written 02-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Thank you so much, Lora. I so appreciate your encouraging, warm words and your most generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
I like this florette even better than your last one. It has a sense of delight - well, at least for anyone that loves to explore the tide pools. As always, you make your words flow so well. This one is a charmer. Rose.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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I like this florette even better than your last one. It has a sense of delight - well, at least for anyone that loves to explore the tide pools. As always, you make your words flow so well. This one is a charmer. Rose.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Rose, thank you :-) What a lovely compliment :-) Brooke
Comment from RADIO
Loved your poem as I've been drawn
for years to this great love affair.
I spent so much time by the ocean.
Even now I am usually one of the first
at the beach during summer and then that
is when we find these beautiful gems.
Radio
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Loved your poem as I've been drawn
for years to this great love affair.
I spent so much time by the ocean.
Even now I am usually one of the first
at the beach during summer and then that
is when we find these beautiful gems.
Radio
Comment Written 02-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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Radio, I'm glad this poem appealed to a fellow fan of the sea :-) Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I enjoyed this form you have created a piece with so many descriptions that reads very well I am sure the readers will feel they are with you on the sure well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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I enjoyed this form you have created a piece with so many descriptions that reads very well I am sure the readers will feel they are with you on the sure well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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I appreciate your kind review, Fuller - it's nice to hear from you again :-) Brooke
Comment from Annmuma
No matter what today's array,
soon tides will wash these gifts away,
till morrow's tide reveals a prize
more dazzling, laid before my eyes, on rich display.
--Sort of like life, isn't it? Every day a brand new box to open and explore. thanks for a great poem. ann
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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No matter what today's array,
soon tides will wash these gifts away,
till morrow's tide reveals a prize
more dazzling, laid before my eyes, on rich display.
--Sort of like life, isn't it? Every day a brand new box to open and explore. thanks for a great poem. ann
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Ann. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :-) Brooke
Comment from --Turtle.
Hi Brooke,
It took me a couple times to read this to really get the flow, but tonight I read and I was able to settle into the beat, and I wondered why I wasn't able to this morning. Maybe too early for poems... I was able to feel like I was walking along a beach finding these treasures myself, and then the final part of the longer line was like looking up and having a thought. Which I liked.
--Turtle.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Hi Brooke,
It took me a couple times to read this to really get the flow, but tonight I read and I was able to settle into the beat, and I wondered why I wasn't able to this morning. Maybe too early for poems... I was able to feel like I was walking along a beach finding these treasures myself, and then the final part of the longer line was like looking up and having a thought. Which I liked.
--Turtle.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Thanks, Turtle :-) I have sometimes read a line wrong and then have that way in my head so have to go back later - it just happens! Brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Hello, Brooke! I am gutted because my inbox is mysteriously empty, even though I opened all my messages in order that they should not be deleted. this is the first of your poems I have gotten to read. And what a beauty it is! I am not familiar with the florette form but, thanks to your author notes, I can see you ahve done an excellent job as always. Lovely subject too. I just love poking about in rock pools!
Hugs
Kat
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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Hello, Brooke! I am gutted because my inbox is mysteriously empty, even though I opened all my messages in order that they should not be deleted. this is the first of your poems I have gotten to read. And what a beauty it is! I am not familiar with the florette form but, thanks to your author notes, I can see you ahve done an excellent job as always. Lovely subject too. I just love poking about in rock pools!
Hugs
Kat
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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Hi, Kat. If you ever want to read anything by anyone, you can just access their portfolio. That's how I read people's stuff all the time, bypassing the inbox. Thanks so much, my friend. As far as I know, this is one of those new forms recently invented, not something established like the triolet :-) Brooke :-)
Comment from amada
This is a very difficult work to write, the regulations made me dizzy but the overall impact is so lovely; that I understood. I go to the beach often, I stand by the waves and watch those mysteries. You write lovely.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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This is a very difficult work to write, the regulations made me dizzy but the overall impact is so lovely; that I understood. I go to the beach often, I stand by the waves and watch those mysteries. You write lovely.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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Thank you, Amada. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this florette poem :-) brooke
Comment from raw form
Always so vivid through your words your poems come through with a burst of color and I think I can even smell sea salt just from reading this one brooke it flows great!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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Always so vivid through your words your poems come through with a burst of color and I think I can even smell sea salt just from reading this one brooke it flows great!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, my friend - thanks so much, Brooke :-)
