Ageless Apparition
the reaper61 total reviews
Comment from Frank Fiction
"need not remind of the worry." I like that. "the ones with endless hurry." I like that also. Short and sweet and to the point. Very good. Death awaits us all.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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"need not remind of the worry." I like that. "the ones with endless hurry." I like that also. Short and sweet and to the point. Very good. Death awaits us all.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Mr. Fiction, I thank U.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Victor ...
In your few lines of free-thought writing, you have put forth a message to those who drive fast, regardless of the dangers on the road .... or who live life at such a fast pace that they endanger their health.
There is nothing to suggest changing. Your picture at the top may well give some people nightmares!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Hullo Victor ...
In your few lines of free-thought writing, you have put forth a message to those who drive fast, regardless of the dangers on the road .... or who live life at such a fast pace that they endanger their health.
There is nothing to suggest changing. Your picture at the top may well give some people nightmares!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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what a nice review. I thank U.
Comment from dragonqueen1983
i like your poem form. its rhymes well and i really love the picture that you used as its not as scary as it could be. well done
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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i like your poem form. its rhymes well and i really love the picture that you used as its not as scary as it could be. well done
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank U, my dear. And I mean that sincerely.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A choice of words that are
thought-provoking, Victor...
I'll slow down with you,
my friend.
Well penned... an enjoyable read.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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A choice of words that are
thought-provoking, Victor...
I'll slow down with you,
my friend.
Well penned... an enjoyable read.
Margaret.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank U, Margaret. I hope we all slow down.
Comment from Mike K2
That's my first shadow that I saw, a hooded shadow around my back porch that turned and disappeared just after my dad pulled in to the driveway. It wasn't until many years later that I came upon a similar illustration that represented the grim reaper. That was a bone chilling realization.
I enjoyed the poem and the atmosphere about the figure that you wrote about. Well written and stark.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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That's my first shadow that I saw, a hooded shadow around my back porch that turned and disappeared just after my dad pulled in to the driveway. It wasn't until many years later that I came upon a similar illustration that represented the grim reaper. That was a bone chilling realization.
I enjoyed the poem and the atmosphere about the figure that you wrote about. Well written and stark.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Ooh, I know many things are not explained by science. Chilling.
Comment from smileycloud
hey
good poetry
the images are vivid and tell a woeful tale indeed
and told very well at that
the content speaks of a very dark waiting room thanks for the touch of humour in the authors notes;- much appreciated
lol have a smiley day
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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hey
good poetry
the images are vivid and tell a woeful tale indeed
and told very well at that
the content speaks of a very dark waiting room thanks for the touch of humour in the authors notes;- much appreciated
lol have a smiley day
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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And thank U once again.
Comment from ulster3
Hello victortouche.
A new approach to an old theme and excellent in words and presentation. lol. I guess I'll be slowing down too. If you haven't heard this it might amuse you. Long ago a servant went to his master and asked if he could have money to flee to Sumara, because he'd seen death in the marketplace. He told his master that he was sure death was there for him, and he was so shaken the master gave him the money to go to Sumara. Next day the master was walking and saw death approach. Oh dear, muttered the master it is me that you have come for. Death responded "Oh no I have no time to stop for you because tomorrow I have an appointment in Sumara". This came back to me because of your very excellent poem. Thanks for a lovely read. Ulster
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Hello victortouche.
A new approach to an old theme and excellent in words and presentation. lol. I guess I'll be slowing down too. If you haven't heard this it might amuse you. Long ago a servant went to his master and asked if he could have money to flee to Sumara, because he'd seen death in the marketplace. He told his master that he was sure death was there for him, and he was so shaken the master gave him the money to go to Sumara. Next day the master was walking and saw death approach. Oh dear, muttered the master it is me that you have come for. Death responded "Oh no I have no time to stop for you because tomorrow I have an appointment in Sumara". This came back to me because of your very excellent poem. Thanks for a lovely read. Ulster
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Hah! Thank god for Sumara.
Comment from rhymelord
Dear victor,
What great writing. In the space of seven lines with exquisite meter and effective rhyme, you present a grim picture. At my age, I am certainly slowing down :<)
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Dear victor,
What great writing. In the space of seven lines with exquisite meter and effective rhyme, you present a grim picture. At my age, I am certainly slowing down :<)
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Reg, I thank U sincerely.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
i think this is a wonderful depiction of death. nobody can escape it unless Jesus comes back before we die. time seems to be getting faster for me instead of slower
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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i think this is a wonderful depiction of death. nobody can escape it unless Jesus comes back before we die. time seems to be getting faster for me instead of slower
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Oh, I think that seems true. Time does fly.
Comment from Amfunny
After reading this, I think I will be slowing down a bit myself. I really liked this poem. Perfect art work choice also. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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After reading this, I think I will be slowing down a bit myself. I really liked this poem. Perfect art work choice also. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank U dear. And now the follow up, so to speak. Please read "I of Flesh".
