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Dear Lexi

Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Seeing Life Anew"
"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi,

What a grand idea to ink a tribute to Lexi (pun intendedhere Gram!) And what a doll she is-great photo.

Nothing here to suggest improving upon.

Thanks for sharing your release, and for your informative comments. ;-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    unfortunately, the picture is not of Lexi, but she is a doll -- pm me your email address and I will send real pic. thanks for comments. love, jan
Comment from lola29
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Your source for beauty and joy, Lexi, is an exquisite child. I can only imagine the love you must feel each and every day. Your sentiment is lovely.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    the picture is not of Lexi but both the child in the picture and my dear Lexi are exquisite children. thanks, Lola. love, jan
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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watching you
ensures daily joy
laughing eyes
clapping hands
seeing life anew through you
Lex-enlightenment


This is really quite lovely, a good choice of words,
cleverly presented as a shadorma - and a lovely picture.

Well penned, Jan. Margaret.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    thanks, Margaret. Brooke thought I should write one for Lexi so wanted my first one to be for her. I've got to post a couple more I've written for her as soon as I do some more reviewing. If you have an email address, I'll share pictures of her with you. love, jan
Comment from Oatmeal
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Rdfrdmom2,

Nicely effective and impressive. Very well reflected thoughts and expressions. The theme was wonderful. The flow was smooth.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    My friend, Oatmeal. Seems like forever since I've heard from you. Thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from fictionwriter
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What a wonderful little poem. There is something about the childs antic and the way they view life that makes things seem like they're new. Great job.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    yes, and it helps remind us of what is important, right? thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from joan marie
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This will make an excellent addition to the book. She must be getting big now. Seems like it's been a year almost. This will certainly be a treasure for her. joan marie

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    she is 13 months old and still the joy of my life -- running me ragged but that's okay, too. love, jan
Comment from ArtGal
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Awwwwww, how adorable is this? I love writing poems to my grandkids and it seems as if the girls really like them. This is precious, just watching them grow up and seeing how much enjoyment they have in life. And the enjoyment xhey give to us.' You did a great job on this shadorma, I really enjoyed. . .Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    thanks, Sharon. she seems to like hearing them when I share with her. love, jan
Comment from Showboat
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Hi Jan,

Well, little miss Lexi..love that name..is one lucky kiddo to have a gramma like you. Just think what it will be like for her when she's grown up with a daughter of her own she can read them to.

Wonderful!

Hugs,
Gayle

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    I'm the lucky one, Gayle. she's such a joy and most expressive -- I've got lots of reviewing to do so I can write more. love, jan
Comment from adewpearl
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I love the anew through you internal rhyme, Jan
laughing eyes and clapping hands - what a great scene to visualize - I bet she looks adorable as you play :-)
Your poem is in excellent shadorma form! I look forward to more. Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    I'm thinking I'm really going to like this format, Brooke. thanks for sharing. love, jan
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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A very good morning to you Jan and I love the photo and the cute smile. I enjoyed your poem and the play on words at the end. I wish you the best in your project. Loyd

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    thanks, Loyd. I'm thinking we can take shadormas and do a senryu type twist at the end now and then. love, jan
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 26-Feb-2010
    Wonderful piece and you are welcome, Loyd