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Dear Lexi

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"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hi Jan and that was beautiful, warm, soft and gentle. I have often sat for hours to not move a baby resting one me, they are so precious. LOyd

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    yes, they are, Loyd. good to see you again. love, jan
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 25-Feb-2010
    Hi and you are welcome. I have been busy and doing some work on fanartreview, check out my work sometime. God bless, LOyd
Comment from jason456
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As a mother, I can totally relate to and appreciate your beautiful poem. The art work you chose for this is perfect. Well written; good job.
Patti :)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    thanks, Patti. I just love snuggling with my granddaughter. love, jan
reply by jason456 on 26-Feb-2010
    It was my pleasure. Patti :)
Comment from WRITER1
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Loved this, yes rules can wait. They grow far to fast to worry that an extra few minutes in your arms will matter. Just enjoy the moment.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    you are so right. my daughter is fast approaching 20. It is so hard to believe. love, jan
Comment from words
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Well done.

You have beautifully described that baby/mother connection.

I especially liked:you seem secure here
even as I am complete
in immeasurable ways

we are bonded in
irrefutable
unconditional
love

Rules can wait
until
tomorrow

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    thanks, words, but I am the mother's mother -- nanny jan -- but you are so tight -- love, jan
Comment from patmedium
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Lexi's Mom... Thia is an absoluterly wonderful write... It reads extremely well aloud and the love you bear just radiates out between the lines. Thankyou. Pat.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
    actually, I am Lexi's grandmom. She will be calling me Nanny Jan. thanks for your notes. love, jan
reply by patmedium on 26-Feb-2010
    Jan... this is a lovely, memorable poem... despite being one generation removed! You still bear so much LOVE that it radiates!!! Thanks for posting this, NannyJan. Pat.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
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Conventional wisdom isn't always right, although I suppose the intent is to ensure that the parent doesn't fall asleep and smother or crush the baby.
I love how you describe the closeness you feel as you lie close to your baby. I could almost smell the baby lotion!


Juliette

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    nothing like it, for sure. we always sleep in the recliner so I don't roll over on her. LOL! love, jan
Comment from pugdogy
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absolutely beautiful,,,You have managed to capture the bond between mother and baby very well in this writing,,I remember when my daughter was a baby just staring at her sleep-she was amazing,,,enjoy her babyhood, they grow up soo fast.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    I'm her grandmother but it could certainly work for moms, too. Yes, my daughter grew up way too fast. This is like a second chance for me. love, jan
Comment from Begin Again
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Rdfrdmom

Some rules were meant to be broken....Especially ones that bond us to our children.

I remember sleeping on the bathroom floor, propped against the wall with the shower running, because my son could breath better that way...

Beautiful poem about precious love....

smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    yes, I remember those days with my daughter. we do what we have to do to make our kids feel better. thanks for sharing. love, jan
Comment from Dogz
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What rule?! Lol. I just loved this poem Jan. It was short, simple and so full of love. It reminded me of what my wife would say when our children were really young:) I loved the ending. Dogz

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    thanks, again, for the sixer, Dale. I did it for Cindy so feel I should do it for her daughter, too. love, jan
Comment from Lady & Louis
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It's good to see you back, Baroness! How goes the healing of the wrists and so on?

Like the free-verse form of this one; it almost drifts down the page like you're halfway between pondering and nodding off, lol. Curling up for a snooze with the loved one - whether baby, spouse or cat! - is a lovely feeling indeed.

Blessings,
Louise

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2010
    you are so right. I try to write many of these so people are not always sure about whom I speak while other times I want them to be specific to Miss Lexi-poo. She is 13 months old now and wide open -- walking, running, and into most everything. She thinks no is a foreign language. I will send you some birthday pictures soon. Hands/wrists are much better but will never be 100% again, especially in fine motor area; however, I can take care of Lexi and type so life is good. I am seeing a chiropractor once a week (after 3 months of twice a week)in an effort to correct some serious spinal alignment issues. We are making progress which, hopefully, will keep me off the operating table. I have missed L & L! God is good! love, jan