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Comment from Begin Again
Indy
so perfect! What more can you say about six precious words that translate into so much more than that...Excellent job!
Carol
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Indy
so perfect! What more can you say about six precious words that translate into so much more than that...Excellent job!
Carol
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Your kind reviews always make me feel so encouraged, Carol. Thank you for this lovely comment and I always appreciate yur taking the time to read my stuff.
Smiles,
Karyn :>)
Comment from RobinWrites
This is my youngest daughter! For you to catch her spirit is six short words is amazing. I didn't realize you knew her. What a small world, unless you're talking about someone else. Oh, it doesn't matter, because this brought back a lot of memories of her as my wild child. Thanks.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is my youngest daughter! For you to catch her spirit is six short words is amazing. I didn't realize you knew her. What a small world, unless you're talking about someone else. Oh, it doesn't matter, because this brought back a lot of memories of her as my wild child. Thanks.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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LOL ... so I have a mini me as a young girl, Robin? Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind review and comments. I'm delighted it gave you some recalled memories.
Thanks!
Indy :>)
Comment from Curt Mongold
Making snow angels! I know, I was the wildest child, and I made GREAT snow angels, for a lil devil! (lol) When you know what it is without description or pic, that's poetry.
AS Sven would say, "Yumpin' Yiminey, dat's a goot one dere!"
Best wishes Kar,
Curt
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Making snow angels! I know, I was the wildest child, and I made GREAT snow angels, for a lil devil! (lol) When you know what it is without description or pic, that's poetry.
AS Sven would say, "Yumpin' Yiminey, dat's a goot one dere!"
Best wishes Kar,
Curt
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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LOL...yumpin' yiminey, huh? Thanks for the review and comments, Curt. I made the bestest snowangels ever!
Indy :>)
Comment from IrreducibleParadox
Simple, beautiful. An image says more than a thousand words, and a snow angel, well... duh.
This one is really good for the contest parameters. In a way it captures the absence of the child, triggering an imprint, surfacing nostalgia. In essence, it succeeds, and in fewer words than it takes to say it.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Simple, beautiful. An image says more than a thousand words, and a snow angel, well... duh.
This one is really good for the contest parameters. In a way it captures the absence of the child, triggering an imprint, surfacing nostalgia. In essence, it succeeds, and in fewer words than it takes to say it.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you, IP, for taking the time to read this mini and for your kind review and comments. Your words are so encouraging.
Thank you,
Indy :>)
Comment from Valkarie
INDIANAIRISH...COLD, SNOTTY, FROZEN, FINGERS, WHITE, FLUFF.
These are my six words to describe childhood play in snow.
As for your piece, its pure exceptional different inspiring and intriguing and quite possibly impressive and impeccable. I'm only a writer so who am I.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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INDIANAIRISH...COLD, SNOTTY, FROZEN, FINGERS, WHITE, FLUFF.
These are my six words to describe childhood play in snow.
As for your piece, its pure exceptional different inspiring and intriguing and quite possibly impressive and impeccable. I'm only a writer so who am I.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Hello Valkarie! Thank you for taking the time to read and review and your comments are awesome and you sure are a writer. I was all those six words you mentioned while making my devilish snow angels.
Thank you,
Indy :>)
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I enjoyed your piece, and I felt the damn cold Ha Ha...
V...
Comment from Judian James
oh-oh, a short one ..... ummmm ..... This is charming and really quite clever Indy. Yes, a wild, little terror flapping their arms madly in the snow, have suddenly appeared as a little angel (even if we know better!)
I loved this.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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oh-oh, a short one ..... ummmm ..... This is charming and really quite clever Indy. Yes, a wild, little terror flapping their arms madly in the snow, have suddenly appeared as a little angel (even if we know better!)
I loved this.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you, Jude, for this wonderful review...and it was an oh-oh shortie! Glad you liked it.
Indy :>)
Comment from anabelle
Indy, this is absolutely beautiful. What a wonderful and full story you've told in these six words.
I wish you the very best in your contest. Amazing entry.
Kind regards, Monique
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Indy, this is absolutely beautiful. What a wonderful and full story you've told in these six words.
I wish you the very best in your contest. Amazing entry.
Kind regards, Monique
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Oh, Monique! Thank you so much for this incredible review, rating, and your very kind comments. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and thank you!
Smiles,
Karyn :>)
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My pleasure. Great job.
Comment from AnnaLinda
This is a very clever 6 word story IndianIrish! A wild child being transformed into an angel, if only a reflection in the snow.
I used to love to make those angels. Nice job!
Linda
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is a very clever 6 word story IndianIrish! A wild child being transformed into an angel, if only a reflection in the snow.
I used to love to make those angels. Nice job!
Linda
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you, Linda, for your kind review and comments for this micro shortie. I appreciate your taking the time to look it over. Thanks!
Indy :>)
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You are welcome!
Comment from Annmuma
I've seen lots of these lately!! -- snow angels, that is. With our unexpected 12 and one-half inches here in Dallas, every kid decorated their lawn with one. Love the picture, premise and the presentation. Good joc. ann
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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I've seen lots of these lately!! -- snow angels, that is. With our unexpected 12 and one-half inches here in Dallas, every kid decorated their lawn with one. Love the picture, premise and the presentation. Good joc. ann
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Every kid should know the joy of creating an angel in the snow, Ann. I'm glad your Texan kiddos got the chance to plop down and be angelic, go sledding, and make soem snowmen.
Thank you,
Indy :>)
