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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Econ Teacher
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This was a very creative way to tell a story. It was a nice play on words that creates a totally different character from devil to angel in a few moments. Very creative.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
    I was so honored to receive this wonderful review from you for this past work, Econ Teacher. Thank you so much for taking the time to review and share your comments.
    Miles,
    Indy : )
Comment from Ann Smith
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I'm wondering who that wild child was? This is the most fun to do as a kid. I'm wondering what led to this moment and if there was more than one? Good luck with the contest. ann

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Hello Ann! I'm sorry it's taken so long to reply...just back from vacation. After making a snow angel once when I was a kid, my Dad told me the only time I was an angel was when I became one in the snow. Thank you for your kind words and review for this memory.
    Indy :>)
Comment from sunny39
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Irish - Well you did it. You told a complete story in only 6 words and I laughed out loud at the humor. This is fantastic and a definite winner!

Sunny

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you so much, dear Sunny, for this outstanding rating, review, and for your kind comments. Sorry it's taken me so long to repond...but just back from vacation.
    Thanks,
    Indy :>)
reply by sunny39 on 06-Mar-2010
    Hope you had a great vacation. I am a 24/7 caregiver for my hubby - haven't had a vacation in 5 years.
Comment from Donovan
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My snow angels were not quite as perfect as your picture, but then again the transformation never quite happened. I think you get an A for this assignment. I think making snow angels naked is just a man's dream....in my waning years...seems too cold and I can not stand any more of the shrivel factor.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Hello Sir Donovan! LMAO at your wonderful review. Naked snow angels sounds like a great idea...as long as there was a hot tub, some warm red wine, and some hot kisses right after. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from sugardog
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Love this clever entry!! A wild child is tamed by the angel in the snow. Snow angels are a wonderful childhood snow memory-I still like to make them :) Good luck in the contest, Dana

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you, Dana, for your kind review and comments for my childhood winter memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
reply by sugardog on 05-Mar-2010
    Congratulations on your win! Lucky you-a vacation sounds so nice. No worries on the reply :)Have a great weekend, Dana
Comment from samandlancelot
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Anyone can become an angel with enough snow, a little hand and leg movement, and a fun spirit. Wonderful entry in this six word story contest.

Patricia

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you, Patricia for your kind review and comments for my childhood winter memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from skye
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And you are clever, creative, and made me smile.. Wild child indeed, and then an angel.
Very terrific six-word story that is perfect for the contest.
Well done.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you so much, skye, for this great review and your kind and encouraging comments for my winter childhood memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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I liked this one, my friend. I can remember many times
I transformed myself right there on our front yard.
It was my pleasure to read. Good luck.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you, El Gato, for taking the time to read and review my childhood winter memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Amfunny
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Yes, the joy of making snow angels. I think I would probably still do that if I were around snow again. Hard to resist. Nice memory. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you, Amfunny, for your kind review and comments for my winter childhood memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from shelley kaye
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cool! this was an EXCELLENT story! it tells sooo much!

never made a snow angel - but i made sand angels when i was a kid hehe ;)

thanx for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you, again, shelley, for all the wonderful contests you sponsor for FanStory. Thank you for this kind review and comments for my winter childhood memory. I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review, but I'm just back from vacation. What a thrill to find I won the contest :>)
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)