Comment from sparky123

Excellent

I enjoyed your six word story. The choice of words made me feel the wet at the bottom of the sleigh ride! We've had plenty of people taking sleigh rides here for a change! Well done to get a message across in only six words! Cheers

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010

Thank you. Sorry for this cut andpaste, am away from home. Internet access very expensive. But thank you for your review. Best wishes, Marijke

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Oh no! This one came to life for me. I liked your description - splish splash - leaving no doubt that you took a cold bath that day.

Patricia

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010

Thank you. Sorry for this cut andpaste, am away from home. Internet access very expensive. But thank you for your review. Best wishes, Marijke

Comment from Amfunny

Excellent

OMG.. would not want to be on that sled. Horrors... lol. Very nicely done and I enjoyed reading it. Just the thought is making me cold now. :)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010

Thank you. Sorry for this cut andpaste, am away from home. Internet access very expensive. But thank you for your review. Best wishes, Marijke

Comment from Ann Smith

Excellent

I can feel the cold going through my bones now. There is nothing more cold than a wet suit in the snow. I feel a story coming on. Good luck with the contest. ann

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010

Thank you. Sorry for this cut andpaste, am away from home. Internet access very expensive. But thank you for your review. Best wishes, Marijke

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

"brrr" is right
my hands are freezing just thinking about it lol
great entry!

thanx for sharing and good luck in contest!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010

Thanks Shelley, yes, brrr was right!
Warmest regards and hugs
Marijke

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

MARIJKE,

As if I wasn't cold enough (it's 14 degrees Fahrenheit) you want to send chills running up and down my spine...Though you certainly did meet the contest requirements...

smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010

Thanks Carol, sorry, but the prompt made me do it.
Warmest regards from warm and sunny Tassie, Marijke

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Marijke
Great job telling a story in so few words. Good imagery. I could see myself sliding down the hill and crashing into a puddle of water. A great entry for the Six Word Story XXIII contest. I like the art work you picked.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010

Thanks Melissa, that was quite challenging, but also truthful, back in Holland, too many moons ago. Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Marijke,

This is a cute little 6 word story that has a 'splash' ending! Your artwork choice also reflects your story extremely well.

Best wishes in the contest!

Linda

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010

Thanks Linda, that was quite challenging, but also truthful, back in Holland, too many moons ago. Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke

reply by AnnaLinda on 15-Feb-2010

You are welcome!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your six-worder is both visual and tactile which is quite an accomplishment with so few words. The picture you chose is so synergistic as well. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010

Thanks Joan, that was quite challenging, but also truthful, back in Holland, too many moons ago. Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke

Comment from hotstuff

Excellent

You are good at this poet friend. I smiled as I read your six word contest entry. It really did tell a story that I bet loads can relate to too. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010

Thanks hotstuff, that was quite challenging, but also truthful, back in Holland, too many moons ago. Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke