Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Very romantic and yet so innocent. Once again less is more. Wonderful job. Your post gave me goosebumps. Good luck with the contest. You have some stiff competion.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, ?Barb. I appreciate the kind words...Bob

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Barb. I appreciate the kind words...Bob

Comment from ladybird

Excellent

What a very romantic story. I loved it. The description of whatr Lynie wore was very descriptive. All in all a very charming story. And good luck in the contest with this.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, ladybird..Bob

reply by ladybird on 14-Feb-2010

You're welcome.

Comment from tammipratt

Excellent

There were good descriptions and use of words to create some great images.
Good character development throughout the story.
No spelling, grammar or punctuation errors that I could see.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Tammi. You are a sweet person...Bob

Comment from warbler

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this romantic story. It flowed perfectly across the page just in time for Valentine's Day. The wheel chair at the end of the story made it more real.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Warbler. I truly appreciate your thoughts..Bob

Comment from Juliette Chamberlain

Excellent

You are just an old romantic after all, Bob.
It is so touching to know that you felt this way about your wife when you asked her to marry you.
The cosy setting of the restaurant was the perfect venue,
for your proposal.

Juliette

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Juliette. Bless you. Bob

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

what a wonderfully romantic little story. Where are all the romantic men when I need one. That would have been the perfect proposal. Oh, well. At least I can read about them. Well done. Lucky Lynie.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, FW. You are so sweet to say this...Bob

Comment from gene_ink

Exceptional

This is a fantastic toast to a very special relationship. The sensitivity drips off the page in red candy hearts. The best in years to come.
Gene

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010

Thank you, Gene! You certainly honor me with your review, not to mention the big beautiful six! Bless you! Bob

Comment from Soulester

Excellent

Well, this is a beautiful story, Bob, and after reading your author notes, I'm sure it will win big points with Lynie. What a lovely valentine gift this story will be. I like the little twist at the end. I wondered why you mentioned the clinic. Great job! Mary

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010

Thanks, Mary. I appreciate your review very much...Bob

Comment from Ensiferum

Excellent

Wow, this is very romantic. I am not sure if I missed something, but I was surprised at the end to find out that Lynie was in a wheelchair. I didn't guess that, but went back and read the beginning where he 'helped' her into the car. Great job.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Enisferum...Glad you liked this..Bob

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Bob,

Magnificent!

Your heart was overflowing with every word...You couldn't have written a sweeter, deeper love story than this and your wife is a lucky lady.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010

Thanks again, Carol. I do so appreciate you and your reviews...Bob