Cocoon
Repose and Renewal115 total reviews
Comment from chaswriter
amada - This is exactly how I feel at times: wanting to wrap myself in a cocoon and chilling. Great imagery and descriptive you use. Well done.
Charlie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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amada - This is exactly how I feel at times: wanting to wrap myself in a cocoon and chilling. Great imagery and descriptive you use. Well done.
Charlie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you Charlie for reading my work.
Comment from Mrs Jones
Love it. Easy natural thoughts flow down in perfect line breaks. The bliss of solitude.
Good poetry, my friend.
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Love it. Easy natural thoughts flow down in perfect line breaks. The bliss of solitude.
Good poetry, my friend.
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you Rose. I like the bliss of solitude.
Comment from gypsycaravan
"Closed for wantings and needs." I really love this line. It sounds like what every mother would say at least twenty times a day. Your formatting is excellent for smooth reading and flow. I loved your poem. Good work. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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"Closed for wantings and needs." I really love this line. It sounds like what every mother would say at least twenty times a day. Your formatting is excellent for smooth reading and flow. I loved your poem. Good work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thank you for tellling me that "closed for wantings and needs" talked to your heart.
Comment from Tallteller
Love the words and the thoughts, but I am ignorant of the form. So please forgive me if I cannot honestly compliment you on your technical skill. There are so many strange forms of poetry written on this site. I grew up with Dylan Thomas, Tennyson, Milton and Chaucer, so I am completely at a loss most of the time.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Love the words and the thoughts, but I am ignorant of the form. So please forgive me if I cannot honestly compliment you on your technical skill. There are so many strange forms of poetry written on this site. I grew up with Dylan Thomas, Tennyson, Milton and Chaucer, so I am completely at a loss most of the time.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review this work. This style is called "free verse." Simple and not too many rules. The only one I know!
Comment from lola29
You've very well articulated how most of us feel sometimes. It is easier and seemingly safer to stay under the radar. But, it's fun to also come out.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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You've very well articulated how most of us feel sometimes. It is easier and seemingly safer to stay under the radar. But, it's fun to also come out.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thank you lola29 for commenting in this work on solitude.
