Cocoon
Repose and Renewal115 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
Oh yes ... I understand this one completely. There are those times, that perhaps amount to a full day, where staying "within" is exactly where we belong so as not to go without for very long, right? excellent Amada!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Oh yes ... I understand this one completely. There are those times, that perhaps amount to a full day, where staying "within" is exactly where we belong so as not to go without for very long, right? excellent Amada!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you Judian! I am "out" for a while to read what's new fanstory. Best therapy!
Comment from Ensiferum
Sometimes I feel the exact same way, like there is nothing out there for me and the best place to be is within. The line 'Time to honor the complex simplicity of my inner clock' was great.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Sometimes I feel the exact same way, like there is nothing out there for me and the best place to be is within. The line 'Time to honor the complex simplicity of my inner clock' was great.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you Ensiferum for liking that clock symplicity metaphor.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is so simply worded, but by no means simplistic. Inasmuch as one needs to associate with others for a balanced life, there are still times when solitude is golden. kudos
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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This is so simply worded, but by no means simplistic. Inasmuch as one needs to associate with others for a balanced life, there are still times when solitude is golden. kudos
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thank you Perp for reading and reviewing this work.
Comment from RADIO
I think from time to time
we all need that cocoon and yes
I can relate to your words.
With a wife working full time I
have a lot of that time on the days
I'm not caregiving for someone. All I
allow sometimes is soft reflective music
to draw the strings of the cocoon.
Radio
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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I think from time to time
we all need that cocoon and yes
I can relate to your words.
With a wife working full time I
have a lot of that time on the days
I'm not caregiving for someone. All I
allow sometimes is soft reflective music
to draw the strings of the cocoon.
Radio
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thank you Radio for commenting in our need for reclusion once in a while.
Comment from snow leopard
Very nice poem. I like the style and the way it is long and tight within the border. The words well wrapped in a cocoon. Closed. Simplicity. Desire to stay in for awhile.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Very nice poem. I like the style and the way it is long and tight within the border. The words well wrapped in a cocoon. Closed. Simplicity. Desire to stay in for awhile.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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I liked your comment on 'closed simplicity." Thanks!
Comment from RaymondJohn
But don't stay in too long. Winter is too long the way it is. I like the story you tell, and I often feel the same way. I've missed hearing from you. All the best. Ray.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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But don't stay in too long. Winter is too long the way it is. I like the story you tell, and I often feel the same way. I've missed hearing from you. All the best. Ray.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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That such a nice thing to say, Ray! I hope you keep on missing me. It's nice to be remembered. Bless you, dear writer.
Comment from LovnPeace
I loved everything about this poem. It tells my story. Even its style. I live in a wonderful cocoon most of the time. What peace. Blessings dear Amada. Barbara
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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I loved everything about this poem. It tells my story. Even its style. I live in a wonderful cocoon most of the time. What peace. Blessings dear Amada. Barbara
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Hi Barbara! There is peace in letting all go! Blessings back to you.
Comment from Lynne
The format in which you presented this really adds to the melancholy feel; as do your words. Thank you for sharing something we all go thru from time to time. D~
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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The format in which you presented this really adds to the melancholy feel; as do your words. Thank you for sharing something we all go thru from time to time. D~
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Oh yes, those subtle touches of melancholy here and there. Thank you for understanding. My best.
Comment from words
I love this one.
Such an apt description:Closed
for wantings
and needs.
Time to honor
the complex
simplicity
of my inner clock.
So
I will stay in
for a while.
The layout, line breaks and syntax are perfect.
Love it.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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I love this one.
Such an apt description:Closed
for wantings
and needs.
Time to honor
the complex
simplicity
of my inner clock.
So
I will stay in
for a while.
The layout, line breaks and syntax are perfect.
Love it.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you words. I love you love my work!
Comment from another jim
Very nice poetry, amada! I was struck by your interesting choice of words, and how they contrasted with each other.
Cocoon, old mechanical reel, complex simplicity... These words and phrases evoke some great imagery, all of it different, but all supporting the notion of "staying in"...nice!
Down time never sounded so good. Well done! Thanks for sharing...Jim.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Very nice poetry, amada! I was struck by your interesting choice of words, and how they contrasted with each other.
Cocoon, old mechanical reel, complex simplicity... These words and phrases evoke some great imagery, all of it different, but all supporting the notion of "staying in"...nice!
Down time never sounded so good. Well done! Thanks for sharing...Jim.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thank you Jim for listing the words you liked the best!
