Comment from Gaye Hemsley

Excellent

Hi Brooke I just love this poem and it's beautiful photo. The laughter and joy in the child show also in your words. LOL Gaye

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Gaye :-) Brooke

Comment from kintesiegel

Excellent

This is another wonderful form that your poem exemplifies. It's a bit hard for me probably because I am kind of tone deaf and cannot imagine how this is sung.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thank you, kintesiegel. I appreciate your review :-) Brooke

Comment from Queenise

Excellent

What a wonderfully,playful and enjoyable triolet. It is cute and the art is also. It brings some brightness to this reader's day and also some pep. Love it,Brooke. Blessings. Would recommend. Really like this style. Queenise

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Queenise, for your great visits and comments :-) Brooke

reply by Queenise on 28-Jan-2010

You're welcome,Brooke. Queenise

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

This poem was very sweet. I enjoyed the pretty descriptions best. I think this triolet felt more sectioned into three parts. Where the repeating line sparked off the next set of images.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, turtlestage - I appreciate your thoughtful response to this triolet. Brooke :-)

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
Beautiful, happy words in perfect format make this one another to appreciate.
The line "like iridescent fine spun glass" really captures the picture.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Reg, thank you. I'm so pleased you like that particular line :-) Brooke

Comment from HalfHoff

Excellent

I know I have read this format before, but never enjoyed one as much as this ... colors in bubbles ... such a simple truth, but you managed to make it poetry. You are amazing. (THANK YOU for your help on my write also!) Lea Ann

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thank you, Lea Ann. It is always lovely to hear from you, and you're welcome! Brooke :-)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Brook,
thank you for bringing back my childhood memories and
re visioning my kids and their children( grandchildren) blowing soap bubbles
Big smile
Gert

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010

Thank you, Gert. I'm so pleased this connected with your memories :-) Brooke

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Jan-2010

You are so welcome
Gert

Comment from Peeping_Soul

Excellent

i loved the picture here.your words caught me with their stupifying flow and the clarity of thought.great write from you again.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010

Thank you, Peeping Soul - I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Brooke :-)

Comment from tonydem

Excellent

You can't go wrong with tiny tots and as Don Ho would say, tiny bubbles. Always a joy to read Brooke. Not only for the subject but for the flawless rhyme and rhythm.
Tony

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010

Thank you, Tony - you make me smile every time :-) Brooke

reply by tonydem on 25-Jan-2010

That's a good thing. :)Tony

Comment from Amicus

Excellent

This is a cheerful well crafted triolet, Brooke. It is winter-raining here with thunder and lightning and a hint of almost spring in the air...gloomy but promising ... and your sweet little poem provided a warm pleasant first read to this odd day. You have use the form flawlessly, as usual.

Pleasant read; thanks.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2010