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Take Me Back To The Good Ol' USA

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The Crook in the White House

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Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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I stand right beside you in those thoughts, my friend. You did a great job of expressing for so many of us. That is one glimmer of hope, now we need a few more. Love ya, Barb.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Love you and I know you pray also about this issue as I do. Blessings. Barb.
Comment from Nicky B
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I'm not exactly sure what you are celebrating as far as change goes. Republican or Democrat? Their colors might be different but not their true colors. I was excited when Obama was voted in but that he is just better at selling lemons than Bush. Your poem is excellent though as far as expressing your views. I must say this too. I do like Ron Paul. Problem is he's got too much integrity to be President.

Love ya. Nick.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Probably. I do think they end up selling their soul. Thank you and God Bless. Ma
Comment from ModaStan
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Hi, Babs

This goes completely over my head as, being a Brit, I assume it's to do with American politics.

However, I get the general message of 'power to the people' and your sentiments come across strongly and with much happiness.

Best wishes, Stan?

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Soka Stan. Thank you for reading and the stars, and for understanding the gest of it. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from rhymer1
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Dear Lov'n Peace: I am confused. I like the poem but it gives the feel that it is written right after the Boton Tea party and you give no indication it is otherwise but you fonal note has got to be referring to a recent event.

Slainte, rhymer1

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Brown won the Senate seat for Ma. tonight. He is a Republican taking Edward Kennedy's place now, in a Historically all Democratic state. Hurrah!!! Blessings. Barbara
reply by rhymer1 on 20-Jan-2010
    You ought to mention that in your note. I never thought much of Kennedy, but I also think little of what the republicans have been up to for the past eight years. It will take some pretty dumb or evil Democrates to do half as much damage as they have done to the US and the rest of the world.
    Slainte, rhymer2
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    I forgot you don't watch T.V., but there was a huge movement across the Us the summer objecting to the current politics. They dubbed it the Tea Party.
reply by rhymer1 on 20-Jan-2010
    Damn, I truly am out of touch.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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AN ETERNAL DEMAND EXPECTATION DESIRE HOPE!

I liked this poem.

It has true emerging eternal light bound grand flow of thoughts.

The metrical, freely flown and captivating imageries flourish thoughts steeped with the vivid visuals in a voice of clarity.

I enjoyed the style, mode of expression, form and eloquence of lyrical force.

It was a pleasant muse philosophic read.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Thank you very much Alcreator. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Peeping_Soul
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This is a great piece of write.I loved your last line here.IT conveys a world of meanings .Your imagination is really very effective.great write

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Thank you for the compliment. So happy ypu enjoyed it. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from BarnCat
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Your support of the outcome of the Massachusetts election shines without gloating. Your poem expresses your views well without falling into the trap of an insupportable rant. well done. DBL

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Thank you. What a nice complement. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from jayesnb
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it is truly a historic and wonderful night...

Its been decades in the making and it can only go forward from here...

Maybe they will begin to understand that the people are the ones who elect and if you dont listen to the people then we will vote in someone who will...

great job..

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Amen. If they don't WE WILL shout louder in November and beyond... Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Brivaeh
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No offense taken. I loved it, loved the message, love the act behind it. I couldn't agree more, and I hope this truly makes a difference. But I will say that "change" has already come, though perhaps, now, it will be a change for the better. :) Thanks for sharing,

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
    Amen. I know we had change, but the change was worse than before. Criminal is more like it. I don't understand how they can twist and do things so deceptive and get away with it with hardly a whimper from ur lawmakers. I do believe the man must be 8-X...I better stop. Thank you and Blessings. Barbara