A Rhapsody of Rap
talkin' trash51 total reviews
Comment from m_plum
I love it! Very cleverly written and a topic that made me smile! I appreciate people who can write light hearted pieces like this as I seem to find myself writing only about deeper topics that can get quite heavy! Well done and thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I love it! Very cleverly written and a topic that made me smile! I appreciate people who can write light hearted pieces like this as I seem to find myself writing only about deeper topics that can get quite heavy! Well done and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Ms. Plum, a nice review. I'll be looking forward to more from U.
Comment from unbridledspirit
Nicely done and different. Almost too different for me but I felt that it worked for what you were trying to do. It's well written and the duck helps. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Nicely done and different. Almost too different for me but I felt that it worked for what you were trying to do. It's well written and the duck helps. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thanks, I thought the duck was necessary too.
Comment from nucciwriter21
Thought this poem was very good. It flowed smoothly. I liked the whole tort-retort thing. Made it very interesting and enjoyable to read. Good job
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thought this poem was very good. It flowed smoothly. I liked the whole tort-retort thing. Made it very interesting and enjoyable to read. Good job
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U so much.
Comment from Lois Delaney
Rap, and clap
Just don't get zapped
Do your thing
Just let me sing
Cute! Different! Original! All those things that we writers do, or at least try to do. Nice writing!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Rap, and clap
Just don't get zapped
Do your thing
Just let me sing
Cute! Different! Original! All those things that we writers do, or at least try to do. Nice writing!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U Ms. Delaney!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
It took me just a sec, but yes, I figured out to read all the way across. I'm not very good at rap language, but this seems authentic. Sounds like maybe the tort does need reforming. (The picture is a hoot!) Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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It took me just a sec, but yes, I figured out to read all the way across. I'm not very good at rap language, but this seems authentic. Sounds like maybe the tort does need reforming. (The picture is a hoot!) Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thanks Jeanie, I appreciate it.
Comment from mermaids
I am an expert on rap so I do not know if I read this correctly, the picture is great. I admire your attempt at rap, a poetic form out of my league.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I am an expert on rap so I do not know if I read this correctly, the picture is great. I admire your attempt at rap, a poetic form out of my league.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U for an open mind.
Comment from pugdogy
excellent job here!!!
I really enjoyed reading this piece of work with it's tort and retort.
the picture you have chosen fits perfectly.
keep up the great writing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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excellent job here!!!
I really enjoyed reading this piece of work with it's tort and retort.
the picture you have chosen fits perfectly.
keep up the great writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Ms. Pugdogy, I am ever ur faithful servant.
Comment from words
Got a chuckle out of your "upchuck" rap.
Especially liked:
Gonna feel so free On your momma's knee
Just her and me Let's wait and see
Like you on da bubble Ain't got no stubble
I have often wanted to yell back.
And here you have done it for me.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Got a chuckle out of your "upchuck" rap.
Especially liked:
Gonna feel so free On your momma's knee
Just her and me Let's wait and see
Like you on da bubble Ain't got no stubble
I have often wanted to yell back.
And here you have done it for me.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Ha! Thanks. I do believe U have enjoyed the poem as intended.
Comment from HAWordsmith
I have read this upsidedown and backwards and it still does not touch me in any way. The rhyming is there, and the concept is there, it is just not translating to me, the reader. Perhaps I am simply too old. I thank you this posting though, many blessings, and may your words continue to freely flow.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I have read this upsidedown and backwards and it still does not touch me in any way. The rhyming is there, and the concept is there, it is just not translating to me, the reader. Perhaps I am simply too old. I thank you this posting though, many blessings, and may your words continue to freely flow.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U for trying. As U know, not everything works for everybody.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi victor...this is such a clever poem and one I enjoyed reading across then up and down. I think may be more difficult that one might think. I have a friend that writes these type of poems and I have wisely never attempted one! Well done.....chey
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Hi victor...this is such a clever poem and one I enjoyed reading across then up and down. I think may be more difficult that one might think. I have a friend that writes these type of poems and I have wisely never attempted one! Well done.....chey
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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That was very nice of U Chey. Thanks.
