A Rhapsody of Rap
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Comment from patmedium
Who, ME?
I, dear, read the post before I even THINK to look at the author's comments....
So, I read across.
THEN, I went back and read it in columns. First the left. Then the right.
Then I went back and read it in columns again... backwards from the bottom right to the top left.... ending with the duck as a last line.
Finally from bottom left to top right!
And you know what?
It's equally brilliant in every single direction!
Pat.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Who, ME?
I, dear, read the post before I even THINK to look at the author's comments....
So, I read across.
THEN, I went back and read it in columns. First the left. Then the right.
Then I went back and read it in columns again... backwards from the bottom right to the top left.... ending with the duck as a last line.
Finally from bottom left to top right!
And you know what?
It's equally brilliant in every single direction!
Pat.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Now that's a very nice review. And I thank U!
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I aim to please, sire. Pat.
Comment from Angus_Townsend
I loved it! It is a really unique and unusual format and idea and you can read it in so many different ways and interpret different things from it. Well done
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I loved it! It is a really unique and unusual format and idea and you can read it in so many different ways and interpret different things from it. Well done
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I appreciate it. I'm glad U enjoyed it.
Comment from anabellapongasi
Well it certainly sounded like a rap as I read it like a rap. I mean I tried and I felt stupid LOL because rap is not really my thing (old people don't like rap!) but I must admit I kinda enjoyed the beat of your poem,it is fun to read. Nice job.
Anabella
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Well it certainly sounded like a rap as I read it like a rap. I mean I tried and I felt stupid LOL because rap is not really my thing (old people don't like rap!) but I must admit I kinda enjoyed the beat of your poem,it is fun to read. Nice job.
Anabella
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U, as usual, for an open mind. And a nice review!
Comment from Ann Smith
All we need now is a little bit of music background and some sound effects. I believe you have one with the duck in the picture. How cute is that? I like the rhyme and the sarcasm. It had a good beat to it just like a rap. Cool.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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All we need now is a little bit of music background and some sound effects. I believe you have one with the duck in the picture. How cute is that? I like the rhyme and the sarcasm. It had a good beat to it just like a rap. Cool.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U Ann. Love that duck!
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
LOL! I read it both ways! Is that the AFLAC duck??? hmmmm... Anyway, great job with this quacky kinda format. Ya did good. aaaaaaaaflaaaaaaac!
Pea
ps i used to be an AFLAC agent and District Sales Coordinator. ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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LOL! I read it both ways! Is that the AFLAC duck??? hmmmm... Anyway, great job with this quacky kinda format. Ya did good. aaaaaaaaflaaaaaaac!
Pea
ps i used to be an AFLAC agent and District Sales Coordinator. ;)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I love th "Aflac Duck". What an icon they built. That's hilarious U worked for them. Thanks for ur review.
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i was there for it all... our region was #17 in the nation in 2000. i was one of 8 district sales coordinators in that region, dragging up the rear. :) i'll take it.
i learned from the creme of the crop, not the creme of the crap, and it has served me well! lol! :)
i remember when the first envisioned him.
pen
Comment from smileycloud
hey
this is great and a whole lot of fun
cannot help but rock to the tune as we used to say
reads just fine down and across to me
love it
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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hey
this is great and a whole lot of fun
cannot help but rock to the tune as we used to say
reads just fine down and across to me
love it
have a smiley day
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I'm having a smiley day now! Thank U.
Comment from despiser
Victor
ya accross got it, not bad. Good rythym. I guess you already made a song from it. But can you do it on the fly ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Victor
ya accross got it, not bad. Good rythym. I guess you already made a song from it. But can you do it on the fly ;)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. Very nice of U. I notice martial arts on ur "resume". That requires more discipline than I believe I have. And I think I have some( my, that's a lot of I's.) Are U still flexible enough to ur satisfaction?
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no, but i get by. only started 2 years ago, my kids r young too, guess i have to do everything late lol
Comment from skye
Creative word play, with the two conversations going on.
It was clever, dark, edgy, and well constructed.
Rap is not my thing, but your made it interesting.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Creative word play, with the two conversations going on.
It was clever, dark, edgy, and well constructed.
Rap is not my thing, but your made it interesting.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. That was a nice way of looking at it.
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
victortouche,
Ha! Now THAT is a Great little title you came up-LOVED it.
And YES, I was reading across. Cute picture-although I never rate for that stuff. To me it's about your newest creation and all that.
I liked these lines: Gonna deal some trouble, Maximize your rubble-ha! Sounds like attitude, hmmm... ~smile~
Not a HUGEMONGOUS fan of the dark shade of green you got there, but that doesn't matter. It's all good.
Cute poem victortouche- made me smile
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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victortouche,
Ha! Now THAT is a Great little title you came up-LOVED it.
And YES, I was reading across. Cute picture-although I never rate for that stuff. To me it's about your newest creation and all that.
I liked these lines: Gonna deal some trouble, Maximize your rubble-ha! Sounds like attitude, hmmm... ~smile~
Not a HUGEMONGOUS fan of the dark shade of green you got there, but that doesn't matter. It's all good.
Cute poem victortouche- made me smile
Comment Written 15-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. Gosh, I wonder what it would be like to really have "Ze Best"?
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Ha ha... do ya now. Well I am NOT gonna touch that one, but I am a flirt-ha! You are funny victortouche, thanks for the GREAT personality! Karlene
Comment from Poetry Beginnings
Wow, I guess I haven't been around here long enough, but this is very surprising one. Very cool. Very good rhyme and makes nice sound when I play it in my head.
Take care,
PB.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2010
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Wow, I guess I haven't been around here long enough, but this is very surprising one. Very cool. Very good rhyme and makes nice sound when I play it in my head.
Take care,
PB.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2010
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Thank U. A different post, eh?
