A Rhapsody of Rap
talkin' trash51 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
FREEDOM!
I liked this poem.
Word imageries are imaginatively contributory to the thoughts that flow amply.
Visuals are vociferous to appreciate the thoughts.
Poetic expression is structural having a style of its own.
It was a pleasant free read.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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FREEDOM!
I liked this poem.
Word imageries are imaginatively contributory to the thoughts that flow amply.
Visuals are vociferous to appreciate the thoughts.
Poetic expression is structural having a style of its own.
It was a pleasant free read.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. And I must say U have been very generous in ur reviews with me. I appreciate it.
Comment from Scarlettdreams
Well this definitely is some trash talk. LOL LOL Some well expressed trash talk too. lol lol Hey if she is willing to run off with you more power to you. LOL Bravo
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Well this definitely is some trash talk. LOL LOL Some well expressed trash talk too. lol lol Hey if she is willing to run off with you more power to you. LOL Bravo
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. I appreciate people with an open mind.
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
LOL. Yes, I read across first. then I re-read going down. You've made very clever use of words and a rap-rhythm in this piece and I commend your uniqueness.
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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LOL. Yes, I read across first. then I re-read going down. You've made very clever use of words and a rap-rhythm in this piece and I commend your uniqueness.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Very nice review, and I thank U.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your lyrics--rather like your own version of rap! I enjoyed your rhymes and the double entrendres. Very imaginative and with a suitably comical picture.
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I admired your lyrics--rather like your own version of rap! I enjoyed your rhymes and the double entrendres. Very imaginative and with a suitably comical picture.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U Joan. I think U did get the picture!
Comment from lola29
Okay, move over Eminem, I think there is a new rapper coming up. You did a good job with your thouughts--good rhyming. Keep up the rapping.
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Okay, move over Eminem, I think there is a new rapper coming up. You did a good job with your thouughts--good rhyming. Keep up the rapping.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I think I heard Eminem was the best selling artist of the last decade? Hard to believe, eh?
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It's a mystery, to say the least. It seems with the right promoter, anyone can be a star, but I think he's talented and that accounts for his staying power.
Comment from Mike K2
It reads nice both ways and would make a nice rap, between two people a rappin. The imagery is start and poignant, also being well written.
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It reads nice both ways and would make a nice rap, between two people a rappin. The imagery is start and poignant, also being well written.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U so much, Mike.
Comment from Plotosaurus
A good rhythmic piece of poetry. It flows well when read across. The author's note is helpful. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the good work.
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A good rhythmic piece of poetry. It flows well when read across. The author's note is helpful. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I thank U.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a unique style that i like.I LIKE THE CONSISTENT RHYMING, THOUGH A FEW WERE NOT PERFECTLY RHYMED. Sounds like someone trying to make some assertions or affirmations to himself. kudos
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This is a unique style that i like.I LIKE THE CONSISTENT RHYMING, THOUGH A FEW WERE NOT PERFECTLY RHYMED. Sounds like someone trying to make some assertions or affirmations to himself. kudos
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Absolutely right. And move in on "territory".
Comment from Xuders
I like this call-and-response poem, which takes some of the air out of the macho balloon. In particular, I like
Gonna feel so free On your momma's knee
A hoot!
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I like this call-and-response poem, which takes some of the air out of the macho balloon. In particular, I like
Gonna feel so free On your momma's knee
A hoot!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. I do love that line. It certainly does deflate the balloon a little, eh?
Comment from sierra scribbler
This is great, and the pic is perfect for this song. I truly have zero worthy suggestions for improvement - sorry.
But I thoroughly enjoyed reading your song.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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This is great, and the pic is perfect for this song. I truly have zero worthy suggestions for improvement - sorry.
But I thoroughly enjoyed reading your song.
Thanks.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U. U don't have to feel sorry for a thing, except maybe being on Lake Tahoe. Of course, it's a free country and I could move. I'm jealous.
