A Rhapsody of Rap
talkin' trash51 total reviews
Comment from PoetSpirit
Having two young adults at home that love this genre helps me relate to it. I thought the rhyme and rhythm were perfect and it holds true to form as far as rap goes. Very cleverly written since it does rhyme whether you read it across or by columns, even though reading across sends a different message than reading by columns I found it very interesting.
Best wishes, Emily
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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Having two young adults at home that love this genre helps me relate to it. I thought the rhyme and rhythm were perfect and it holds true to form as far as rap goes. Very cleverly written since it does rhyme whether you read it across or by columns, even though reading across sends a different message than reading by columns I found it very interesting.
Best wishes, Emily
Comment Written 18-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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Very nice review, and I appreciate it.
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you're welcome.
Best wishes, Emily
Comment from rhymelord
From a fifty-four year old this can only be described as AWESOME. Just think how good you'll be when you grow up. Very entertaining, but where is the background music?
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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From a fifty-four year old this can only be described as AWESOME. Just think how good you'll be when you grow up. Very entertaining, but where is the background music?
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 18-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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Awe, who wants to grow up? Thank U for a kind review.
Comment from volunteer angel
Right on I'm gone!
I'm looking at you don't get in a stew!
My fingers tap love this rap!
Rhyming is great you're top rate!
Great job 5 point lob!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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Right on I'm gone!
I'm looking at you don't get in a stew!
My fingers tap love this rap!
Rhyming is great you're top rate!
Great job 5 point lob!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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You're funny! And thank U for the review.
Comment from Peeping_Soul
The format is new for me here but the words that you have used really spruce up this brilliant piece of write.I am looking forward to read more of your work
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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The format is new for me here but the words that you have used really spruce up this brilliant piece of write.I am looking forward to read more of your work
Comment Written 18-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2010
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How very nice of U. Thank U. And I hope U do read more.
Comment from JudeC
Victortouche:
This is clever and fun. I can't say I really understand it all...but I do know enough to know you have captured a true essence of RAP.
I am at a loss to offer any suggestions. :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Victortouche:
This is clever and fun. I can't say I really understand it all...but I do know enough to know you have captured a true essence of RAP.
I am at a loss to offer any suggestions. :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Thank U so much. It was a different take, eh?
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Good work -- reads just
like rap....and I'm impressed
with the presentation...
I can't get evil eddie to let me
paste with indents to paragraphs
without him plastering question
marks all over my work, let alone
paste and save in two columns...
Margaret.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Good work -- reads just
like rap....and I'm impressed
with the presentation...
I can't get evil eddie to let me
paste with indents to paragraphs
without him plastering question
marks all over my work, let alone
paste and save in two columns...
Margaret.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I know what U mean. I had trouble with evil Eddie as well. Thanks for an open minded review.
Comment from Kathy58
Excellently done poem/song. I am not sure what satire poetry is though. I would love to learn more. I enjoyed this a lot. I love the format and your flow and rhythym and rhyme of words here. Nicely done, Kathy58
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Excellently done poem/song. I am not sure what satire poetry is though. I would love to learn more. I enjoyed this a lot. I love the format and your flow and rhythym and rhyme of words here. Nicely done, Kathy58
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Satire was just picked because I can never find a proper category. But thanks for ur review!
Comment from Kingmb
Nice tort-retort, I liked the read it was combative and creative. I guess your not going out to get the new fifty-cent release. Keep rappin
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Nice tort-retort, I liked the read it was combative and creative. I guess your not going out to get the new fifty-cent release. Keep rappin
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Ha! Nice review, and I thank U.
Comment from bayoupoet
This is as good as the Rap Songs I have heard. I really don't get into rap though some people think it is great. I guess it is my age showing!
Blessings,
sandra
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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This is as good as the Rap Songs I have heard. I really don't get into rap though some people think it is great. I guess it is my age showing!
Blessings,
sandra
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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Much appreciated review. Thanks.
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You are very welcome, Victor!
sandra
Comment from joemass
G'day Victor Touche
I'm not entirely convinced that this is my thing but i enjoyed the rhythm, the rhymes weren't too forced and it all moved along at a good pace.
I have spare pavement space near here if you'reintersted :-)
Cheers
Joemass
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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G'day Victor Touche
I'm not entirely convinced that this is my thing but i enjoyed the rhythm, the rhymes weren't too forced and it all moved along at a good pace.
I have spare pavement space near here if you'reintersted :-)
Cheers
Joemass
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010
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I might just need that pavement! Do I pay protection? Thanks for the review.
