He was a jolly good fella
a funny obituary contest entry71 total reviews
Comment from Diyar
Hi Yel Tel,
This was a clever and funny poem, I would laugh if this was read at my own funeral! Good whimsical, lymerick quality was achieved in the flow.
Good luck in the contest.
Kind regards,
Diyar
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2010
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Hi Yel Tel,
This was a clever and funny poem, I would laugh if this was read at my own funeral! Good whimsical, lymerick quality was achieved in the flow.
Good luck in the contest.
Kind regards,
Diyar
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Diyar, for such a great review. Lol. Yes, I would smile too if this was read at my funeral.
