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Here's to You, Frankie

How some Entrepenauers are remembered.....

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Comment from jadapenn
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Oh, what a confusion. I'm still laughing at all the names and the 'accepted the honor and a gift of $50,000.' This for being a pall-bearer. Liked the closed casket ceremony. Man, what I wouldn't have give to go to this funeral. Highroads to nowhere and developments which can't be reached. You really have a wild muse there.
Well written. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010


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    Jada

    Guess it comes from being married to an Italian for 23 years..Get a divorce and your black-listed for sure. HAHA Glad you enjoyed this bit of merriment. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from missy98writer
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Carol,
Your obituary is a hoot. I love the title "Here's to You, Frankie." I thought I was reading Norma Jean (Amfunny) and that's a complement. That broad is funny. I love the art work. Your descriptions are fantastic. I wish I had six to give you. I laughed so hard I can barely type your review. I liked the names of the official Pallbearears:
"Jimmy "The Weasel" Panini, Tony "Big Tuna" Salamone, Vincent "The Fish" Frisella, Joey, "Knee Cap" Santorielle, "Jimmy "The Chop" Marinelli, and Carmine "The Doctor Lombardo." How did you come up with those fantastic names. You used Italian foods as some of the names. The last line was the clincher: "May Frankie's body rest in pieces."
Thanks for sharing great humor.
You better be careful because Charles "Cement Boots" Canollin will be coming after you.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010


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    Melissa

    I consider Norma Jean's humor out of the ball park, so I am honored that you would make the comparison. Thank you so much. I guess being married to an Italian for 23 years gave me a little insight. HAHA Thanks again, Carol
reply by missy98writer on 08-Jan-2010
    Great Italian humor. You'll probably win, so far yours gets my vote.
    Melissa.
Comment from mbroyles2
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Oh yeah, this is funny!
It's a long obituary but I guess someone as outstanding as ole "Lead Boots" deserves it.
A very enjoyable read.
Good luck in the contest.
Michael

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010


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    Michael

    Straight from the horses mouth..I was married to an Italian for many many years...Glad you saw the humor. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from misscookie
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oh this is too much i cab't stop laughing in fact I almost had a accident on myself.
I love it the story was outrageous.
this is a great write.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010


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    Cookie

    Guess maybe being married to an Italian for years gave me an inside track. HAHA Thanks so much, Carol
reply by misscookie on 08-Jan-2010
    Your so funny!!!!!!