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Comment from Hanna Marie
What a soft floating feeling, reading your work. You hit the mark without the reading coming off like you were aiming anywhere but to the heart of the one this in intended for. Have a good weekend. Hanna Marie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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What a soft floating feeling, reading your work. You hit the mark without the reading coming off like you were aiming anywhere but to the heart of the one this in intended for. Have a good weekend. Hanna Marie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Hanna Marie - I hope you have a lovely weekend too :-) Brooke
Comment from RhiannonD
How beautiful! I am a songstress and this poem would make a lovely song! It reminds me of the song "I wish I were a tiny sparrow..." just superb.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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How beautiful! I am a songstress and this poem would make a lovely song! It reminds me of the song "I wish I were a tiny sparrow..." just superb.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much, Rhiannon. How lovely that you think it would make a good song :-) Brooke
Comment from Icepaddles
I liked the spirit of this work, grasping the fortitude to make a system of virtue, and a sumination of that as it gives to this writing its own. It all fits well with the format too. What a wonderful learning experiance I've had
on FANSTORY, thank you, Jon
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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I liked the spirit of this work, grasping the fortitude to make a system of virtue, and a sumination of that as it gives to this writing its own. It all fits well with the format too. What a wonderful learning experiance I've had
on FANSTORY, thank you, Jon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much, Jon, for this most generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from ulster3
Hello Brooke.
Of course you know that once I saw your recognition I had to read the work. :) This would have been read anyway had I been here. This is a wonderful thought which is beautifully composed. One cant even feel the shift from abab to ccdd, except that you pointed it out. Exceptional! Becca
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Hello Brooke.
Of course you know that once I saw your recognition I had to read the work. :) This would have been read anyway had I been here. This is a wonderful thought which is beautifully composed. One cant even feel the shift from abab to ccdd, except that you pointed it out. Exceptional! Becca
Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you, Becca - what a lovely review to wake up to - you are most generous :-) Brooke
Comment from ZigzagMLT
Thought I would come and check out what you had written, what I had missed.
Congratulations are certainly in order for this soft and heartwarming piece.
What a love poem, indeed. It shines, like a star, in its simplicity.
Thank you,
Zigzagmlt
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thought I would come and check out what you had written, what I had missed.
Congratulations are certainly in order for this soft and heartwarming piece.
What a love poem, indeed. It shines, like a star, in its simplicity.
Thank you,
Zigzagmlt
Comment Written 11-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much, Zigzagmit, for this wonderfully generous review :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem - I don't write romance very often, so it's nice it worked. :-) Brooke
Comment from LYLE
Dear Brooke,
This is indeed a lovely poem and statement, which deserves more than simple words. It deserves a poem from me to you.
I am a singer, this is true/and sing I will a song for you/
but sew for you I will not do/To charm your ear and warm your bed/come morning and you'll find me dead!
Fondly, Lyle:)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010
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Dear Brooke,
This is indeed a lovely poem and statement, which deserves more than simple words. It deserves a poem from me to you.
I am a singer, this is true/and sing I will a song for you/
but sew for you I will not do/To charm your ear and warm your bed/come morning and you'll find me dead!
Fondly, Lyle:)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2010
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Thank you, Lyle. What a beautiful lyric response to this poem, dear friend :-) Brooke
Comment from SamanthaD.
From reading this poem I can see why you are the # 1 ranked poet on this site. Beautiful- simply beautiful! I'm currently Poet # 287 but, for me, having only been on this site one week, I'm happy to even be listed! I really love your poem
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2010
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From reading this poem I can see why you are the # 1 ranked poet on this site. Beautiful- simply beautiful! I'm currently Poet # 287 but, for me, having only been on this site one week, I'm happy to even be listed! I really love your poem
Comment Written 06-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2010
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Welcome to Fan Story, Samantha : -) Everyone starts at the bottom of the list, which only means you're new :-) Thanks so much. Brooke :-)
Comment from Blue Danube
Hello Brooke:
Congratulations on winning the poem of the month with beautiful "Were I a Seamstress." Maybe not a songstress or a seamstress but surely a great poet.
Blue
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Hello Brooke:
Congratulations on winning the poem of the month with beautiful "Were I a Seamstress." Maybe not a songstress or a seamstress but surely a great poet.
Blue
Comment Written 01-Feb-2010
Comment from Poetic Friend
Brooke,
This poem is simply outstanding and well-deserving as Poem of the Month. I did not read the other entries, given I visit the site minimally (maybe three times a year), but I know your craftmanship.
The metaphor works so well. In its brevity, this poem is memorable and gives one a sense of warmth. I sincerely love every line. Love poems can sound trite if not written with originality and unique creativity. You did a superb job with the innovation.
Congratulations on the win! I leave in awe.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2010
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Brooke,
This poem is simply outstanding and well-deserving as Poem of the Month. I did not read the other entries, given I visit the site minimally (maybe three times a year), but I know your craftmanship.
The metaphor works so well. In its brevity, this poem is memorable and gives one a sense of warmth. I sincerely love every line. Love poems can sound trite if not written with originality and unique creativity. You did a superb job with the innovation.
Congratulations on the win! I leave in awe.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2010
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Thank you so much, my friend for this wonderfully generous rating and your encouraging and gracious comments about my poetry! I truly do appreciate your stopping by and your congratulations. Brooke :-)
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Brooke,
Very nice!
No wonder you won!
I like the title.
And the message.
Great image and visual presentation as well.
My favorite lines are your last 2. Wow, very powerful and heart felt.
Great job.
Congratulations!
Kathryn
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2010
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Brooke,
Very nice!
No wonder you won!
I like the title.
And the message.
Great image and visual presentation as well.
My favorite lines are your last 2. Wow, very powerful and heart felt.
Great job.
Congratulations!
Kathryn
Comment Written 30-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Kathryn, for your gracious review and kind congratulations :-)
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Brooke, you're welcome.
Kathryn
