senryu (America means)
5/7/5 senryu4 total reviews
Comment from rhymer1
If I agreed with you, this would certainly express my hatred quite well, but my experience is so different from yours, I am tempted to believe we are from different countries. But, I award a fiver for clarity.
Slainte, rhymer1
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2009
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If I agreed with you, this would certainly express my hatred quite well, but my experience is so different from yours, I am tempted to believe we are from different countries. But, I award a fiver for clarity.
Slainte, rhymer1
Comment Written 29-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2009
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Yes, we are from the same country (the United States.) In fact, I am on your blocked list from a disagreement years ago. Thanks for a great review.
Comment from Blue Danube
This is a painful senryu to read because it happens to also be true as to corruption, violence, racism and other terrible abuse of power inflicted by those who are supposed to serve and protect.
Your words come through loud and clear.
I'm sorry for your suffering at the hands of perpetrators.
Blue
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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This is a painful senryu to read because it happens to also be true as to corruption, violence, racism and other terrible abuse of power inflicted by those who are supposed to serve and protect.
Your words come through loud and clear.
I'm sorry for your suffering at the hands of perpetrators.
Blue
Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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I survived. I wish more had. Thanks for a good review.
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
Hello to you,
hmmm...well, I gave your entry 5 stars for it's VERY STRONG opinion and words.
I may not necessarily agree with it all, but I can see why you do and appreciate your creative words placed here in your poem.
It is a Great poem for your stand, truly!
I do believe the police make many mistakes and have been guilty far too often-they are only human.
Having been in law enforcement-gun, badge etc. I know many can and do break rules and then hide behind all that title entails
Great writing, truly!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Hello to you,
hmmm...well, I gave your entry 5 stars for it's VERY STRONG opinion and words.
I may not necessarily agree with it all, but I can see why you do and appreciate your creative words placed here in your poem.
It is a Great poem for your stand, truly!
I do believe the police make many mistakes and have been guilty far too often-they are only human.
Having been in law enforcement-gun, badge etc. I know many can and do break rules and then hide behind all that title entails
Great writing, truly!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Thanks for a good review. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi!
Who could argue with your unrighteous treatment? In regard to your author notes, I would guess that it is not all paranoia, but rather substantiated regard for the misuse of power and you being a target. It happens.
Your poem makes a strong statement and with great form
Linda
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Hi!
Who could argue with your unrighteous treatment? In regard to your author notes, I would guess that it is not all paranoia, but rather substantiated regard for the misuse of power and you being a target. It happens.
Your poem makes a strong statement and with great form
Linda
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Thanks for understanding so well. I really appreciate it.
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You are welcome!
