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My Book of Favored Sonnets

Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "This Christmas Morn"
My collection of various sonnets.

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Comment from jlivory
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Dawn of Tomorrow,

This was a nice write that flowed well and mad good use of rhythm and rhymes when used. The artwork is beautiful and goes very well with the scribe. Good luck in the
Holiday Poetry contest.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from jl & bandit
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great sentiments for this beautiful day.
I saw no flaws in this write.
the rhyme and rhythm was good .
the thoughts flowed well.
Nice work.
JL&B

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from nora arjuna
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hi Dawn, thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts on the morning of your celebration day. i enjoyed the read and have learned more about this day. have a great time!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from indelibleink
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A very inspirational and uplifting message; particularly on Christmas day (but any other day also)! Has nice meter and flow; I enjoyed it! Keep it up...

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from PastorBrady
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Thank you Dawn of Tomorrow,

May your enjoyable, thoughtful and uplifting be truely felt by all who read it. Your Spirit is wonderful and may it touch all who come to know you, then maybe one fine day we will bring defeat through Christ acting within us to evil!
Have a Happy and Merry CHRISTmas season.
Sincerely,
Pastor Brady

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    One day that will happen, much strife before that day ahead of us though I fear. Thank you so much for sharing your time and thoughts.
Comment from Kingsland
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you touch on some varied emotions in this well written verse. It flows within its message very smoothly.I found this to be very well written and poetically stated. This was just a joy to have read and written a review for... John

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    Thank you, John, it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Dawn ~ this is really very beautiful and expressive of your faith. Excellent flow and rhyme with lovely presentation. Truly enjoyed this fine read...wish I had a six to offer!!! Hugs and smiles, Susanne

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 Comment Written 25-Dec-2009

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
    Thank you so much, dearest Susanne. I haven't been around much the last few weeks, need to catch up on your writing. I saw you wrote a heroic sonnet, my goodness what a feat. I shall try to review that within the next few days. Hugs and love, JL