Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Ronni,

This was an absolutely beautiful verse; and we are so honored by the dedication. It looks like a gorgeous Christmas card in verse! Loved the color and that precious picture. I am overwhelmed with the wishes you sent our way, and hope some come true. Let this holiday season bring peace and blessing into your soul. You've enriched our lives too, and we are fortunate and blessed to have you.

Thank you again and, happy Holidays!

Ho-ho-ho!

Love and hugs,


Yelena

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2009

Thank you yelltel, for this most heartwarming review, I am
truly touched by all your generous compliments and kind comments.
I am so glad you enjoyed it; and took time to comment. This is
quite a unique and special forum, with a lot of terrific writers;
most of whom are so helpful and encouraging. Thanks again...
and you too, have a truly blessed and wondrous Chnristmas.

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

Thank you Ronni, for such kind and gracious good wishes to your FanStory followers. I hope you know how much your poetry is appreciated and enjoyed by all of us.This is no exception. It is a beautiful reflection of the artist who created it.

You don't have to come to the blackboard, because it is Christmas vacation, but you might want to correct the spelling of just one word; "reminiscences" I assume was what you meant in this line? "laughter, surprise and sweet reminices." (I might be wrong... so let me know.)
~ I love you, Ronni.. Merry Christmas to you!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2009

Thank you dear friend, for kind words and generous compliments.
Will check that "r" word out...thanks again for your thoroughness
Blessings and sincere gratitude always.

reply by MissMerri on 14-Dec-2009

You are more than welcome... any time. Just keep singing. :D LOL

Comment from jason456

Excellent

Hi Ronnie,
And a very Merry Christmas to you and yours also at this wonderful time of year. I really loved your card. It is very special.
Patti :)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

Thank you Patti, glad you enjoyed. Blessings and best wishes
to you and yours for Christmas and happiest of New Years!!!

Comment from Oatmeal

Good

Ronni,

Wonderful poem. The flow was smooth. The theme was well chosen. Your feelings are well expressed.

I did spot some SPAG-

bless you and yours, bringing you peace, hope**
**a comma goes here

most revered celebration (world wide); that honors
**worldwide

The Divine's Love and most sacred (Gift)..His (Beloved) (Son);
**gift
**beloved
**son

Everything else looks great.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

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 Comment Written 12-Dec-2009

Comment from cleo85

Excellent

Thank you for the beautiful idea of a Christmas card for the community. Thank you for the beautiful and thoughtful poem and thank you for illustrating it with my card.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you too cleo85, and very best wishes to you too. It was
the perfect choice, and so glad you had it available. Best to
you and yours for the Holidays!

reply by cleo85 on 13-Dec-2009

Thanks again.
Merry Christmas
Cleo

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a beautiful Greeting Card ofering well wishes to FS members. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Merry Christmas to you, too.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you, for the kind thoughts and comments. Sincerely
appreciated. Hope you and yours have a most splendid Christmas!

reply by c_lucas on 11-Dec-2009

You're welcome, Ronni. Charlie

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Ronni,

This is filled with warmth and good cheer, and it celebrates the birth of the Lord. Well done and the presentation is superb.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you and warmest wishes to you and yours for Christmas.
Appreciate your thoughts and good wishes too. Take care.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

A poem that makes one feel good and it is so nice of you to write a poem for all of us here on this site. Happy holidays and best wishes.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you mermaids, for the warm thoughts and kind review.
Sincerely appreciated. May you have the most wondrous Christmas!

Comment from skye

Excellent

A Hallmark card just for the members of this site... what a choice and beautiful gift.
Beautifully crafted, with wonderful rhymes and lines, carrying the true message of the season...
Merry Chirstmas and Love from your Savior.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you sky, for your warm review and lovely comments and
compliments. So happy you enjoyed. Blessings to you and yours.

Comment from asma khan

Excellent

This is a lovely poem and very well written. Merry Christmas to you also enjoy and have fun.
The last line is my best line, The Divine's Love and most sacred Gift..His Beloved Son;
each year, precious all the more!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009

Thank you asma khan, for your lovely review, caring and
thoughtful comments. Sincerely appreciated. Blessings to you
and yours for the Holidays.