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The Christmas Spirit

The meaning of Christmas to me.....

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Comment from irishauthorme
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Beautiful thoughts, well written! I love people who retain the meaning of Christmas and pass that along to their children.
There are so many commercials that are aimed at kids, trying to teach them that the only meaning of Christmas is their presents.
Good job!
Cheers, Irish

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    It was the way I was raised and felt the importance of teaching my babies the same way. I truly appreciate you noticing that. xoxo
Comment from sibhus
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Some very heartfelt thoughts that we all could benefit from. Wouldn't it be nice if we all could reflected on the true meaning of Christmas and spend less time getting caught up in materialistic aspect of the season. Wonderful thoughts and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    I am so happy that you liked this. I deeply appreciate your comment and review.....xoxo
Comment from Jordan Rose
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Very nice essay. I did notice one correction needed:

"Celebrating baby Jesus's birthday is a priority to my children and I."- should be 'me'.

good luck. Jordan

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thanks so much Jordan....xoxo
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
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It is heartening to hear of someone actually teaching their children that Christmas is in fact a celebration of the birthday of Jesus (whether or not he was actually born on that day.)
Once the central focus is right everything else can be enjoyed too.
I like your sentiments.
Best wishes for the contest.

Juliette

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thank you so much!! xoxo
Comment from Sasha
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I like this very much. You got straight to the point and wrote from your heart. This is a very good entry for the contest too. I sincerely wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thank you so so much!! xoxo
Comment from tonydem
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You have a wonderful Christmas spirit. And I applaud you, Heidi, for passing it on to your children. May you all have a wonderful holiday season and may Santa fulfill all your children's wishes and leave a little happiness in your stocking as well. You sound like a wonderful deserving mother.
Tony


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thanks so much Tony!! You are the best....xoxo
reply by tonydem on 11-Dec-2009
    You're welcome.
Comment from Annmuma
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Yes, I believe we all agree that Christmas is about love and caring and family. You've done a really nice job of sharing your thoughts. Good luck. ann

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thank you my friend.......xoxo
Comment from WRITER1
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It is true that we should have the Lord on our minds on his special day. So many children only know Christmas as a holiday for Santa. It is sad that they have never heard the story of the real Christmas.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    The REAL story should be known by everyone I think.........thank you so very much!! xoxo
Comment from kingskid
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Excellent entry. Your priorities with the children are so right and also the comments about the tree and the special card received.
Lovely thoughts.
Well done and good luck
kingskid

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thanks so very much!!!! xoxo
Comment from Pen&Ink
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Hello Heidixoxo,

A very well thought-out and neatly written account of the Christmas Spirit. Focus on others is the underlying theme. I like that angle.

I found only one tiny flaw. The opening line in the third paragraph should read "...a priority to my children and 'me.'" Objective case, rather than the subjective "I".

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Ray

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
    Thank you so much my friend....xoxo