Comment from Frances Jean

Excellent

I just loved your poem - so tragic, deep and soulful. My favourite stanza is the fourth one and conjures up such a feeling of love and loss. All the best in the competition. Good work!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009

Comment from dayan1980

Excellent

This is beautiful. I am imagining Alicia Keys singing it. I enjoyed the depth of this. What a beautiful song this would be. Good work and I wish you all the best in the competition.

Dayan

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009

Comment from Sally Carter

Excellent

I think you've done a grand job with the inspiration this song gave you. The rhyme and meter are excellent, which made it a pleasure to read, with no stumbly places where I had to work things out. Works both as song lyrics and as a poem. I really enjoyed it. Sally

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

i read this earlier and it is a sad, but beautiful poem. it was hard to read because of the red italics, but the words and the sentiment were well done. enjoyed the picture that you chose to go with it.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2009

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a wonderful contest entry you have penned. I love that song by Josh Groban also. This is a winner for sure. Merry Christmas and hugs, teri

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Comment from jkataeff

Excellent

I loved this, it sang to my soul, you should be a song writer I'm sure there would be alot of musicians who read this that would love to put it in a sog. Well done!!

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