~Reunited~
A couple reunites....18 total reviews
Comment from Vladilynn
Yes....not only sex also needs to be pleasure with love and care. Mostly we need that!!loll
I like the Whew part!! makes me chuckles~ it will be better if there's more details but still the word echoes in how it will be thrilling~mmmmmm.....ehrm. LMAO
well done and good luck to you!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2009
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Yes....not only sex also needs to be pleasure with love and care. Mostly we need that!!loll
I like the Whew part!! makes me chuckles~ it will be better if there's more details but still the word echoes in how it will be thrilling~mmmmmm.....ehrm. LMAO
well done and good luck to you!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2009
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thanks so much.....xoxo
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Heidixoxo,
I am fond of reading to your mature fiction. I loved to read it because one thing you have told that "In my eyes and heart, I don't want or need any other man. Ben was plenty for me", the same made you a true lover and great in feeling and this is natural any one must have, not only human, other creatures also need, so no need to hesitate or feel shame if you are by heart pure with your lover. I found here your purity which pushed you reunite with your lover Ben. Pleasure and Relaxation are greater in human life to be fresh and active and these are needy things too. So you are taking pleasure as much as possible, I say you are successful in your life. Everyone can't be satisfied like this, they will get bored life. So you have written quite nice fiction. According to story I can't say this is vulgar. Please do well more so I would get chance to read your work more. Please take care and bye.
Kamal
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2009
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Dear Heidixoxo,
I am fond of reading to your mature fiction. I loved to read it because one thing you have told that "In my eyes and heart, I don't want or need any other man. Ben was plenty for me", the same made you a true lover and great in feeling and this is natural any one must have, not only human, other creatures also need, so no need to hesitate or feel shame if you are by heart pure with your lover. I found here your purity which pushed you reunite with your lover Ben. Pleasure and Relaxation are greater in human life to be fresh and active and these are needy things too. So you are taking pleasure as much as possible, I say you are successful in your life. Everyone can't be satisfied like this, they will get bored life. So you have written quite nice fiction. According to story I can't say this is vulgar. Please do well more so I would get chance to read your work more. Please take care and bye.
Kamal
Comment Written 04-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2009
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Thank you so much. I will be writing more soon.......xoxo
Comment from jl & bandit
Its really a sweet piece, I didn't feel that it needed an adult warning, but then who am I anyway. Only someone who really enjoyed this read,I think it was tastefully done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Its really a sweet piece, I didn't feel that it needed an adult warning, but then who am I anyway. Only someone who really enjoyed this read,I think it was tastefully done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thank you so much......xoxo
Comment from Begin Again
Heidi
Naughty yet nice...leaving a bit to the imagination without giving us straight porn...Very nicely done. This should be an excellent contender in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Heidi
Naughty yet nice...leaving a bit to the imagination without giving us straight porn...Very nicely done. This should be an excellent contender in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 03-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thanks so much my friend......xoxo
Comment from Writeaway...
You built up sexual tension, I found no spags whasoever and was kept interesed from the beginning. Excellent job, I wish you well in the competition, keep writing!!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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You built up sexual tension, I found no spags whasoever and was kept interesed from the beginning. Excellent job, I wish you well in the competition, keep writing!!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for your encouraging words........xoxo
Comment from jmdg1954
Heidi... seems to be a very hot and steamy entry into the contest... lucky Ben who had someone to take him back for whatever the reason. Good kuck inthe contest..
John
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Heidi... seems to be a very hot and steamy entry into the contest... lucky Ben who had someone to take him back for whatever the reason. Good kuck inthe contest..
John
Comment Written 02-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thank you so very much and I am happy you liked this.........xoxo
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hello Heidixoxo,
You express yourself in this story very well. The plot is realistic, as are the sex scenes. Aside from misspelling panties (painties) I don't have much to complain about. Needless to say, you held my attention.
Ray
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2009
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Hello Heidixoxo,
You express yourself in this story very well. The plot is realistic, as are the sex scenes. Aside from misspelling panties (painties) I don't have much to complain about. Needless to say, you held my attention.
Ray
Comment Written 02-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2009
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I am glad you liked this. I truly appreciate your sweet and kind comment....xoxo
Comment from irishauthorme
I liked your slow lead in, the pleasure your lady expressed when she caressed herself smoothing lotion on her body after her shower, and the ultra-feminine nighty.
You really teased us with the thong adjustment, and then the unexpected knock on the door-
When her and Ben reunited like that it made me wonder why they ever split up!
Good story,
Irish
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2009
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I liked your slow lead in, the pleasure your lady expressed when she caressed herself smoothing lotion on her body after her shower, and the ultra-feminine nighty.
You really teased us with the thong adjustment, and then the unexpected knock on the door-
When her and Ben reunited like that it made me wonder why they ever split up!
Good story,
Irish
Comment Written 02-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2009
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I am glad my opening worked well. Thank you my friend.....xoxo
Comment from tonydem
No doubt this is hot, hot, hot. This will be tough to compete with Heidi. Very nice imagery too. Just the word thong does it for me. lol. Good luck with this.
Tony
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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No doubt this is hot, hot, hot. This will be tough to compete with Heidi. Very nice imagery too. Just the word thong does it for me. lol. Good luck with this.
Tony
Comment Written 01-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Thongs do rock right Tony?? LOL Thanks for the awesome comment my friend......xoxo
Comment from Thesis
Heidi, that was very erotic. I like your sensuous description of the sex. It's more seductive written this way, leting the reader see everything you describe, in their mind.
Ben was a lucky man, LOL. - John
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Heidi, that was very erotic. I like your sensuous description of the sex. It's more seductive written this way, leting the reader see everything you describe, in their mind.
Ben was a lucky man, LOL. - John
Comment Written 01-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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LOL....Thanks so much John!! xoxo
