Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Tunes from a Mountain Stream"Poems employing this musical, repeating form
104 total reviews
Comment from fionageorge
A stunning piece, both visually, and the words and joyful and beautiful.
Great rhythm and rhyme, and a free flowing poem.
Stunning.
Warmest regards
Marijke
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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A stunning piece, both visually, and the words and joyful and beautiful.
Great rhythm and rhyme, and a free flowing poem.
Stunning.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment Written 01-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Marijke, thanks so much for your lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from peggysis64
A beautifully written piece that succeeds in painting a complete audio and visual picture for me. I see and I hear.
Flows easily..k
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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A beautifully written piece that succeeds in painting a complete audio and visual picture for me. I see and I hear.
Flows easily..k
Comment Written 01-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Thank you, Peggysis for your kind comments and positive review :-) Brooke
Comment from sara-beth
This is sort of like...the Glory of God in nature, right? The poem expresses the wonder we can feel when we come upon such beautiful scenes in the world, and how it connects us to the universe. Great job! Fanstory is so changed, I hardly recognize it! Do you like all this fancy rearranging of things?
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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This is sort of like...the Glory of God in nature, right? The poem expresses the wonder we can feel when we come upon such beautiful scenes in the world, and how it connects us to the universe. Great job! Fanstory is so changed, I hardly recognize it! Do you like all this fancy rearranging of things?
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you, sara-beth - you are precisely right :-) I am not a computer person, so any change throws me. I'm just starting to get used to it. Brooke :-)
Comment from Kathy58
Brooke, here is another one of your masterpieces. Your beautiful words just keep flowing out. The Arwok itself say a thousand words. It is your wonderous words that touch us all. The unigueness of it all.The exceptional rhyming words to make it all work to perfection. Kathy58
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Brooke, here is another one of your masterpieces. Your beautiful words just keep flowing out. The Arwok itself say a thousand words. It is your wonderous words that touch us all. The unigueness of it all.The exceptional rhyming words to make it all work to perfection. Kathy58
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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I love searching for the best possible art on Fan Art - it is a great place to spend time :-) Thanks so much, Kathy. Brooke :-)
Comment from Lokman
Hi Brooke,
What's pretty amazing is that this poem is so much like our mornings here, the sound of water, birds singing. I loved reading this.
Shea
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Hi Brooke,
What's pretty amazing is that this poem is so much like our mornings here, the sound of water, birds singing. I loved reading this.
Shea
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thank you so much, Shea, and my apologies for this delayed reply. Brooke :-)
Comment from sugardog
Sorry it took me a few days to read this. I may be slow during these months due to harvest time!
I really enjoyed this poem and thought I could actually hear gurgling as I was reading. This sounded almost like a hymn to me. Very pretty and soothing. Nice job Brooke.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Sorry it took me a few days to read this. I may be slow during these months due to harvest time!
I really enjoyed this poem and thought I could actually hear gurgling as I was reading. This sounded almost like a hymn to me. Very pretty and soothing. Nice job Brooke.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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I just looked at your profile - you live and work on a Christmas tree farm - that is just TOO cool. Thanks so much. Brooke :-) Brooke
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You are welcome! Yes, busy here :) I will try to check in from time to time-wierd early, early times or really late at night. After harvest I will be a little more free...Hope you had a nice thanksgiving!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Very well written there is nothing more beautiful than sitting by a stream just listening to the sounds very peaceful regards Fuller
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Very well written there is nothing more beautiful than sitting by a stream just listening to the sounds very peaceful regards Fuller
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Fuller - I totally agree :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
The bluebird sings, so full of joy
and lifts the hearts surrounding.
It never dreams of shame nor ploy,
just sings, so full of joy.
The human wonders at the sound,
and smiles with gladdened breast.
The bluebird sings, so full of joy,
surrounding hearts lift in their chests.
Mike
Most definitely NOT a triolet, but certainly a tribute :-)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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The bluebird sings, so full of joy
and lifts the hearts surrounding.
It never dreams of shame nor ploy,
just sings, so full of joy.
The human wonders at the sound,
and smiles with gladdened breast.
The bluebird sings, so full of joy,
surrounding hearts lift in their chests.
Mike
Most definitely NOT a triolet, but certainly a tribute :-)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Mike - I don't care if it's a triolet or not - it's a lovely tribute, my best reviewer ever :-) Brooke
Comment from christopherjl
Thanks very much for sharing your upoem. I have no suggestions for your writing at this time. Instead I'll just say keep writing and sharing with us on FanStory.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thanks very much for sharing your upoem. I have no suggestions for your writing at this time. Instead I'll just say keep writing and sharing with us on FanStory.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Christopher, thank you for your kind words. Brooke :-)
Comment from Fish
I used to take a lot of hallucinogenic mushrooms
and go fishing on streams that looked similar
to your pic. Then I found God and He said:
"I am the Mushroom Cloud of Eternal Streams
from which you may fish but only on Sunday,
when I'm in church being worshiped"
Then Jesus came along and He said: "Dude, He
was just kidding... you can go fishing whenever
you want... just don't write wank poetry in
praise of Me; for that, you will surely go to
Hell...
Not to say that your poem is wank... I like it!
Fish
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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I used to take a lot of hallucinogenic mushrooms
and go fishing on streams that looked similar
to your pic. Then I found God and He said:
"I am the Mushroom Cloud of Eternal Streams
from which you may fish but only on Sunday,
when I'm in church being worshiped"
Then Jesus came along and He said: "Dude, He
was just kidding... you can go fishing whenever
you want... just don't write wank poetry in
praise of Me; for that, you will surely go to
Hell...
Not to say that your poem is wank... I like it!
Fish
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Fish - I'm having a bit of trouble figuring out the tone of your reviews lately. Is something wrong, my friend? Brooke :-)
