Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

I love the flow and stunning presentation of this poem.
Such a beautiful form.

What a delightful thought - hope floats on their miraculous wings.

I enjoyed this poem (and your author notes).
Interesting rhyme scheme. :)
Nic

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009

Thank you, Nic. It is always wonderful to hear from your kind self :-) Brooke

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

your poem are always so very musical. This is another piece of very free flowing poetic thoughts that was my pleasure to have written a review for... John

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009

Thank you, John - I love the forms that allow for that musicality :-) Brooke

Comment from clawhammer

Excellent

Beautiful poem Brooke. Your use of repetition is so effective with this structure. It's such a wonderful part of nature that you have captured with such simple words. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009

Thank you! I love the repetitive forms :-) Brooke

Comment from Lyrical_CD

Excellent

There you go again working in the educational aspect of pollination into a poem...and it has flowers. Well written triolet again. Are you on a Triolet kick?
Cory

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009

Yep, a triolet kick it is, Cory - you missed entire forms while you were gone! LOL Thanks, dear friend :-)

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Brooke, this is so perfect
a poem... and such depth
of thought for truly the
honey bee and humming bird
to perpetuate live through
their daily duties. A six
pointer definitely but alas
I have none... :)Lora

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Lora, thanks so much. I appreciate your generous impulses. :-) Brooke

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is lovely. It is amazing how the symbiotic relationships work. YOu have to believe an intelligence beyone anything man knows is responsible.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

I certainly believe :-) Thank you, Beth. Brooke :-)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Pollenation is necessary to bring about new life. The use of puncuation is not necessary to bring forth a good poem. Sometimes, the poem is smoother without puncuation. Very good job.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Charlie - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 25-Nov-2009

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is a beautiful piece reminding us all that we have so many things to be grateful for even the smallest can make so much difference regards Fuller

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

thank you, Fuller, as always :-) Brooke

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

I like the "wispyness" --is that a word-- of this work. It has a fluttery, hopeful, fanciful and everyday feel to it. We, much like hummingbirds and honeybees, just get up in the morning and do the job right in front us, never realizing the long range effect of our everyday lives. Good job. ann

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

If it isn't a word, it should be! :-) Thanks so much, Ann :-) Brooke

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
Another faultlessly constructed poem in one of your delightfully oddball favourite formats. I love your use and understanding of what serendipity means.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Reg. Did you just call me an oddball??? LOLOLOL I love you, too!! Brooke :-)