Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Invitation"Poems employing this musical, repeating form
107 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, Brooke, it's adorable! I am so glad I stumbled on it in your portfolio. I like fantasy pieces; and this is a double delight here. The picture is precious, and sets the tone. Very much liked the repeating line:
As fairy dust falls from my wand
Unicorns are mystical creatures; there must be a legend attached to it; I'll have to research it. This was magical:
as fairy dust falls from my wand
to free you from the earthly bond
that binds you from the day you're born.
I loved this Triolet, Brooke.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Oh, Brooke, it's adorable! I am so glad I stumbled on it in your portfolio. I like fantasy pieces; and this is a double delight here. The picture is precious, and sets the tone. Very much liked the repeating line:
As fairy dust falls from my wand
Unicorns are mystical creatures; there must be a legend attached to it; I'll have to research it. This was magical:
as fairy dust falls from my wand
to free you from the earthly bond
that binds you from the day you're born.
I loved this Triolet, Brooke.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thank you so much, Yelena - sorry this reply got delayed as the review got buried. I could not be more honored or appreciative :-) Brooke
Comment from elainec4
adewpearl,
Enjoyed reading this. I've collected unicorns for many years and remain fascinated with them--so your poem spoke to me. This form and its repetitious nature added to the magic. elaine
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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adewpearl,
Enjoyed reading this. I've collected unicorns for many years and remain fascinated with them--so your poem spoke to me. This form and its repetitious nature added to the magic. elaine
Comment Written 20-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Elaine. Glad you're a fellow unicorn admirer :-) Brooke
Comment from Sloughi
That is just SO beautiful. I have been 'off-line' for a few days...gastric flu or the dreaded 'swine flu', don't know, except I wanted to die lol. To come back and read your beautiful poem...bliss..Thank you
Chrissie
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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That is just SO beautiful. I have been 'off-line' for a few days...gastric flu or the dreaded 'swine flu', don't know, except I wanted to die lol. To come back and read your beautiful poem...bliss..Thank you
Chrissie
Comment Written 20-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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flu - how horrid - I'm glad you're back and no longer hoping to die :-D And I'm glad you enjoyed my triolet :-) Thanks, Chrissie Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
A beautiful piece written very well with great colour choices and art work to enhance again very creative well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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A beautiful piece written very well with great colour choices and art work to enhance again very creative well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 20-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Fuller. I appreciate your kind review :-) Brooke
Comment from Hitcher
That was rather cool Brooke, I haven't tried one of them for a very long time, they are quite a challenge, well done friend, I thought it was great.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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That was rather cool Brooke, I haven't tried one of them for a very long time, they are quite a challenge, well done friend, I thought it was great.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thanks, Hitch - I have never done chain rhyme before, and yeah, challenging :-) Brooke
Comment from Rvaltaysesd
Wow that beautiful image!
I liked the poem and picture, the poem has a lot of magic and fantasy, imagining long ago, I liked too!, Very, very good poem, greetings Rvaltaysesd
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Wow that beautiful image!
I liked the poem and picture, the poem has a lot of magic and fantasy, imagining long ago, I liked too!, Very, very good poem, greetings Rvaltaysesd
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you, my friend - I appreciate your kind review :-) Brooke
Comment from Phil Kitom
Oh how you have captured the mystery and
the beauty that fairy tales can offer us.
Who would not want to sit astride that
unicorn and wander off into a land of
such excitement.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Oh how you have captured the mystery and
the beauty that fairy tales can offer us.
Who would not want to sit astride that
unicorn and wander off into a land of
such excitement.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, my friend - I appreciate your kind comments about my poem of fantasy. :-) Brooke
Comment from Rabianabian
Yay, unicorns!! :) Love this little fantasy piece. Excellent flow and rhyme. Not very much description, but the picture makes up for that! I think that my favorite line is this one: "to free you from the earthly bond
that binds you from the day you're born." Don't know why I like it. I just do.
Great job and good luck in your further work!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Yay, unicorns!! :) Love this little fantasy piece. Excellent flow and rhyme. Not very much description, but the picture makes up for that! I think that my favorite line is this one: "to free you from the earthly bond
that binds you from the day you're born." Don't know why I like it. I just do.
Great job and good luck in your further work!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thanks so much, Mary - it's hard to pack too much description into so tiny a poem, so I'm glad you were OK without it :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
Definately a fantasy poem, the first one I have read with a unicorn in it. You did well with the form and this gives one a brief escape into another world.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Definately a fantasy poem, the first one I have read with a unicorn in it. You did well with the form and this gives one a brief escape into another world.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Elaine. Glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
Comment from Lisha L
This is a well written piece following the pattern of the type you described. I love the picture you have chosen as this adds to the story beautifully. This reminds me of a poem that a little girl would love.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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This is a well written piece following the pattern of the type you described. I love the picture you have chosen as this adds to the story beautifully. This reminds me of a poem that a little girl would love.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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I'm pleased you like this triolet - thank you, Lisha. Brooke :-)
