Legal Tendencies
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Getting To Know You...."Two attorney's fall in love....
8 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Heidi
You have nothing to worry about in getting the steamy sex down...Great job in your description, It certainly put the reader in the mood.
Well done...
Carol
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2009
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Heidi
You have nothing to worry about in getting the steamy sex down...Great job in your description, It certainly put the reader in the mood.
Well done...
Carol
Comment Written 08-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2009
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LOL...Im glad this part is working. Believe it or not, this is a brand new genre for me.......xoxo
Comment from empire76
Nice. You keep you no-beating-about-the-bush pace, which works for the chapter.
- His hands were placed on my head, guiding me to his own rhythm as I allowed him to continue.
I like this
- ...causing my nipples to become erect.
Her nipples are already erect (as I recall from the previous chapter) so perhaps it got harder, or ached or something ??
E
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2009
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Nice. You keep you no-beating-about-the-bush pace, which works for the chapter.
- His hands were placed on my head, guiding me to his own rhythm as I allowed him to continue.
I like this
- ...causing my nipples to become erect.
Her nipples are already erect (as I recall from the previous chapter) so perhaps it got harder, or ached or something ??
E
Comment Written 08-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2009
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Im glad you like this part. I do appreciate that a lot.
xoxo
Comment from dlewis
Heidixoxo...This is such a turn on,that I don't even know where to begin cause I loved every bit,especially Steven..
His warm mouth between my thighs, now this I like...this so good, that I must read it over again..dlewis
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Heidixoxo...This is such a turn on,that I don't even know where to begin cause I loved every bit,especially Steven..
His warm mouth between my thighs, now this I like...this so good, that I must read it over again..dlewis
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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LOL.....indeed slightly heated up. Thanks fir commenting and reviewing.....xoxo
Comment from irishauthorme
Wowee, what could be better than hot passion on a cold day!
Great action, and you kept us right there with the graphic descriptions!
More passion in the next chapter? Can't wait!
Great writing,
Irish
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Wowee, what could be better than hot passion on a cold day!
Great action, and you kept us right there with the graphic descriptions!
More passion in the next chapter? Can't wait!
Great writing,
Irish
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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LOL...I am so happy you enjoy this. More to come soon.
xoxo
Comment from Sasha
You did a marvelous job with this chapter. Your descriptions are strong, provide excellent imagery. You seem to have a knack for the sensual scenes. Very well done. Keep up the good work. I found one sentence you might want to look at:
slid his wet ... I would change 'his' to 'it'...
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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You did a marvelous job with this chapter. Your descriptions are strong, provide excellent imagery. You seem to have a knack for the sensual scenes. Very well done. Keep up the good work. I found one sentence you might want to look at:
slid his wet ... I would change 'his' to 'it'...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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lol....ok sounds good to me. Thx so much for your opiions. xoxo
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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This is very well written with a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Thank you so much....xoxo
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You're welcome, Heidi. Charlie
Comment from Hitcher
I'm reading a little blind here friend, so I'll only comment on the chapter itself, I love a bit of erotic, arousing writing myself so I have to say well done, you definitely got the blood pumping with the visuals friend, very nice!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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I'm reading a little blind here friend, so I'll only comment on the chapter itself, I love a bit of erotic, arousing writing myself so I have to say well done, you definitely got the blood pumping with the visuals friend, very nice!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Thank you so much for reading, commenting and rating my work. I do appreciate it very much. If you ever get a chance, please read the whole story and tell me what you think. xoxo
Comment from wierdgrace
I love your writingand how well you put Steven and Kim, the two best characters in the love making mood, I loved it, and could feel it, well written and great short chapter, all that is needed here
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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I love your writingand how well you put Steven and Kim, the two best characters in the love making mood, I loved it, and could feel it, well written and great short chapter, all that is needed here
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Thanks so much. I am happy you are enjoying this. Its truly appreciated my friend....xoxo
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you are so welcome
