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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi2
You made me smile when I read you entry.
How true when it's like that in Sermon time to get out the Gorge Foreman grill
good luck in this contest.
Gert
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Hello Helvi2
You made me smile when I read you entry.
How true when it's like that in Sermon time to get out the Gorge Foreman grill
good luck in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2009
Comment from Belinda
Gosh... how humorous my friend Helvi is! You can make fun of your disappointment of not having the barbeque. Your title, tag, poem, and artwork make a 'whole' presentation!
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Gosh... how humorous my friend Helvi is! You can make fun of your disappointment of not having the barbeque. Your title, tag, poem, and artwork make a 'whole' presentation!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from jahees
clever, love the photo to go along with the sentiment of the poem. Humorous and makes sense with a short amount of words. Good job.
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clever, love the photo to go along with the sentiment of the poem. Humorous and makes sense with a short amount of words. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from bard owl
Oh, I don't like winter. What a sad view of a grill! Winter puts the stops to so many enjoyable summer events. Best of luck in the contest. BLessings, Linda
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Oh, I don't like winter. What a sad view of a grill! Winter puts the stops to so many enjoyable summer events. Best of luck in the contest. BLessings, Linda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from ladyscarlet
LOL, this is really cute. It made me laugh! The picture goes with it spendedly and I do like your play on word!
Great Job!
~LadyScarlet
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LOL, this is really cute. It made me laugh! The picture goes with it spendedly and I do like your play on word!
Great Job!
~LadyScarlet
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from sgalletti
Great entry in this lune contest. It was a fun form of haiku/senryu to write. Loved the imagery of the white snow as chili sprinkled on the ground forcing the cancellation of the barbeque. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
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Great entry in this lune contest. It was a fun form of haiku/senryu to write. Loved the imagery of the white snow as chili sprinkled on the ground forcing the cancellation of the barbeque. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from starkat
Hello Helvi...
I can see why the barbeque was cancelled. Heck, the roads are probably closed and no one can get to this barbeque anyway. You'll have to reshedule it for next spring... so much for global warming...;) Oh well, you can always go get some take-out barbeque and build a big fire in the fireplace.
This is a lovely lune. Best wishes in the contest!
Cheers... ;0) sk
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Hello Helvi...
I can see why the barbeque was cancelled. Heck, the roads are probably closed and no one can get to this barbeque anyway. You'll have to reshedule it for next spring... so much for global warming...;) Oh well, you can always go get some take-out barbeque and build a big fire in the fireplace.
This is a lovely lune. Best wishes in the contest!
Cheers... ;0) sk
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from IndianaIrish
What a delightful Lune, Helvi! I say, just sweep that snow off the picnic table and let the BBQ begin! LOL I enjoyed your poem and wish you best of luck in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
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What a delightful Lune, Helvi! I say, just sweep that snow off the picnic table and let the BBQ begin! LOL I enjoyed your poem and wish you best of luck in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from leesm
Hi Helvi. You have written a very fun entry to this contest. "White chili" is a great and clever description. Love it!
Warmly,
-Lee
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Hi Helvi. You have written a very fun entry to this contest. "White chili" is a great and clever description. Love it!
Warmly,
-Lee
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Teri7
I love it because it has snow on it. You used very good descriptive wording and I can see where it was begging for a poem. Good luck. Hugs, Teri
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I love it because it has snow on it. You used very good descriptive wording and I can see where it was begging for a poem. Good luck. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
